She's in class everyday, but she never seems happy.
She has friends, but likes to be alone.
And today... I saw her crying to herself.
It's not the first time I've seen her cry, either.
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Maybe this is Alula the pegasus here being so nice to Diamond Tiara? You wrote it very well.
damn ending had me tearing up
way to go
Reminded me of this,
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You got me tearing up thar at the end, and I mite cry ones A year.
I kept thinking about Rumble - he's the first one in my mind who has a brother but isn't Apple Bloom.
Nevertheless, a sweet little read
The ending makes a bonus for the whole story. Well done!
I love to see a sequel! The colt is very sweet, I wonder why Silver Spoon doesn't come on Valentines Day?
WHY ISN'T IT FEATURED?!
D'aw! Cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute!
Can I just say one form of criticism? (Edits after re:)
Short, sweet and heartwarming. Great work!
This was very sentimentally written. Love the idea, too. I can somewhat relate, having been in both of those situations to a lesser degree, and you characterized extremely well. As others have said, a sequel following their evolving friendship would be quite fun, although I'd also say that it's a large amount of work. This deserves a feature or three.
*BOOM!!!*
Huh, my feel-o-meter is broken again. I think it was too much for me and my feels broke. I really need to get that damn thing fixed.
Well, either way, this story took me THERE, so that's a bonus. I hope this gets featured.
Saw your blog post earlier, I can relate to a situation like this.
You wrote this sublimely. I do hope you get a feature for this story as it's deserved.
Short and sweet, like a powerpuff girl.
Aaaaaaaw!
Punch to the feels.
The train of thoughts from the colt were written very nicely. That was a great job!
This was a pretty well-written story, and very sweet. Nice job.
"If not me, then who?" A question we should all ask ourselves. Great story!