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Comet Burst


The man without a plan.

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Every year, Prince Solaris of Equestria and Princess Celestia of Equestria have a dimensional meeting to discuss matters pertaining to both worlds. What happens during these meetings, nopony knows.

They each have a devoutly loyal Royal Guard who almost share the same name, Starry Sky and Celestial Sky, and both have problems with being around the opposite sex.

When they get word of this, they decide to fix this problem in their own way.



Based off of the 'A Broad Scope' comic short.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 144 )

Well, this was enjoyable and entertaining. I look forward to reading where you plan to go from here. Either way, that was rather well written, and I look forward to more. Keep being awesome! fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/001/b/5/clapping_pony_icon___princess_luna_by_taritoons-d5prurt.gif

Do I think this is a good..
Yes.

Well written chapter. :twilightsmile:

Let's see how this plays out...

I've never heard of the comics, but I liked this.

Brilliant, it's hilarious to see those two open up a bit.
Very nice beginning, I hope you'll write more soon. :twilightsmile:

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I hadn't heard of it either until I was searching for Royal Guard images. After reading it, I had to write a story to it.

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is a broad scope comic on tumblr?

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I have no idea. It was just a two page comic I found while browsing.

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So.....

It's about the ponies meeting with the rule 63 universe?

This was quite enjoyable. I am glad stories like this still make it on the featured from time to time. Too much clop most of the time. Even being based on a comic, this was very well written and I enjoyed watching the reactions the two lieutenants gave each other. Funny enough, I enjoyed the ending the most. Even though they are parallel dimensions, they're problems are not the same, and there is actual benefit to them meeting. So much can be drawn from so little, that it creates endless possibilities, and I wish you the best of luck exploring them. :twilightsmile:

... I'm okay with this.

To those of us who have already read the part two know why there's no Romance tag... :trollestia:

Celestial Sky nodded his head quickly and saluted her.
"It is my duty and an honor to protect you tonight, Princess," he spoke swiftly.
The Solar Princess smiled to him before tossing back her flowing rainbow mane and trotted through the doorway, her guard following her instantly. The two trotted through the hallways of the castle, making their way towards the entrance hall before Celestial Night spoke up.

Who the hell is Celestial Night!?

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That is actually what I was initially going to name him before I realized some readers wouldn't make the connection between him and Starry.

I will edit that.

This...this has captured my attention:rainbowderp:

Hmmm I'm interested to see were this is going. This isn't tagged as romance so I'm guessing it won't be a romantic thing, which is just as well since that's technically incest and this is rated Everyone. :twilightsmile:

3700793 It's not incest, it's masturbation

Dan

Nice to see the Cross and Arrowverse isn't dead.

A damn shame On a Whisper of Wind seems to have stalled out.

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believe it or not, it isnt, actually. incest implies siblings, or ancestral inbreeding. if they were to have sex, it would be a very active version of masturbation. if one were to get pregnant from it, it would be CLONING!

Selfcest is best cest~ :trollestia:

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Instant fav I love the material you do Comet.

3700928 Cloning... Holy crap, why has this never occured to me?

And what gender would the resulting monstrosity be?

Well, hijinks will ensue for sure.

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Nah, just narcissism.

LOL


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believe it or not, it isnt, actually. incest implies siblings, or ancestral inbreeding. if they were to have sex, it would be a very active version of masturbation. if one were to get pregnant from it, it would be CLONING!

Actually all reproduction in technically cloning of a sort. And yeah it wouldn't be incest in the strictest sense of the word but since the only difference between them is there gender they are essentially identical twins with different genders, which can't actually happen.

Still for some weird reason there isn't a proper term for sexual contact with your alternate dimension opposite gender counter part. :raritywink:

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You know, that's actually a good question, which may not be a simple 50/50 chance as In normal genetics. See, when considering a gender swapped universe, it doesn't make much sense to simply say that every time a person (or pony or whatever) is conceived, the result is different, because this becomes a more and more contrived universe each time. Instead, the simplest way to have this come about is to reverse the genetics. That is, perhaps in the gender swap universe, the chromosome for building a female is dominant while the male gene is recessive. That might mean that ponies from the different universes couldn't successfully interbreed at all, or that the result would be sterile or a hermaphrodite. Could also be that one of the dominant genes would trump the other and still result in a classic sex. Hard to say, but interesting to consider.

CONGRATS!!! (for getting feture box..AGAIN)

And then the royals stepped outside to find their guards playing Tetris instead anything remotely romantic.

I find it amusing how people are talking about what the technical terminology would be should they have intercourse and breed, when it's dreadfully obvious it won't even come close to that. Though in my opinion I believe it would be considered genetic incest, as only the sex chromosomes are switched. And the children would probably result in extremely similar children, but not clones, and genetic disease would be more likely. What gender would depend on time of fertilization and chaos theory.

Now onto slightly more relevant matters, it seems Solly is just as :trollestia: as Celly, which is to be expected. Nice to know her plan will initially backfire. Also the idea of the Royal Canterlot Snore is humorous to me. I look forward to how this will blow up in someone's face.

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Selfcest should be the term for this.
Selfcest FTW

That's it?

It just... Ended? Like that?

I don't like chapter endings like this, at least have something dramatic happen to keep the audience hooked onto the story, not just a "How's the crop going?" "Good, the problem was solved before it was mentioned." "That's good." *antiDRAMATIC FINISH* There needs to be something to attract the attention of the reader, not just the hope that they'll keep with it because the idea interests them.

More work needed for this. :unsuresweetie:

It's actually impossible for a mirror universe with swapped genders to exist.
Think about it like this, at some point, a male has to have impregnated a female, then, before she has given birth (lets say, for simplicity, two weeks after the first one is fertilized to save arguments about premature babies and such), he then impregnates a second female. This is altogether possible. The reverse, of course, involves the female going out and getting impregnated, then, getting impregnated again while still carrying the first. Barring some rather odd species such as the Kangaroo, or just saying that "It's Magic" then this is impossible once nature has evolved past the point of asexual reproduction.

But is it sex or masturbation?

3703945 Ah, this is where there "infinite dimension" theory takes place. instead of a female being. Pregnant twice at the same time, and alternate reality is made for each child, and/or one child is displaced, so they have different parents. :twistnerd:

3703997 It's sex because it's another dimension, I think.

Though I think I know who really knows:trollestia:

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3703997 It's actually called "Selfcest" it's a real term.

3703997
playing with yourself, doesn't saying what dimension you are from haha like cloning you know :derpyderp1: :derpyderp2:

Hilariously cute! :rainbowlaugh:

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i know, but its a real term in that it was made by 4chan.

Shall totally read, if only because its from Comet.

3700250 As they say: if you can't even get along with yourself, how are you supposed to get along with anypony.:trixieshiftright:

3701489 :fluttershbad:EWWWWWWWWW.:pinkiesick:
For some reason I really don't like the sound of that.

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I can see the odds canceling one another in the long run; but when we are talking about reproduction here, in the short term is not so much about genetics as it is about chromosomes. That being the case a step by step explanation of why there is an uneven ratio of M/F in either world would go like this.
Synopsis:
Assuming that stallions are still XY and mares are still XX, that would make stallions the determining factor of gender:
1)Rule 63 universe genetics would have the tendency to have more stallions for one of many reasons: because they produce more Y sperm than X sperm, whether because in that world stallions are more likely to survive, or evolution naturally brought the need for a higher reproduction rate of only stallions is what genetics would be about. The opposite is also truth for the regular MLP universe.
While is fair to attribute the uneven rations to genetics, the answer of how exactly that works is key to answer our question in the long run; but not in the short term.

To determine the probabilities of whether the foal will be either male or female, give the stallion still determines the gender, and the stallion in question in this case is from the non-rule 63 universe, where we believe to be a higher female than male ratio. If we attribute that factor to that male tendency to produce so much of one type of sperm; then is safe to assume that the foal is more likely to be female. Do note that following that trail of thought the foal would most likely be male; where the genders of both interdimensional ponies where reversed.:moustache:

However we do not know for fact that the male and female ratio isn't affected by other external conditions in either world, or that is due to more of one being able to survive for any reason, or due to...etc, etc, for any reason that may be post conception. If the circumstances that cause the uneven ration are not dependent of the tendency for stallions to produce a given type of sperm then the chances to give birth could be 50/50 in both worlds and still be able to have more x's than y's in either one world, all the same. :eeyup:

Now about the issue of chances of survival we know that both genetic pools are able to conceive healthy members of both genders, reason why I believe that while the tendency ratio affects the population, such tendency does not mean that our foal will die. The tendency is only that at statistical ratio of what is more likely to happen it is not a reason of cause of fatality, in other words while the odds of procreation of either gender may by swung either way, The odds are not a reason of dead and without a specific reason of dead our foal is not likely to die or be even ill.
Which brings be to my next point.
3702653 All of above reflects only on a random rule 63 mating with random non-rule 63 character.
If the proses would consist of the same character, or selfcest, or as you may even call cloning, Assuming the existence and parallels to our own universe we must also assume that there is a great chance of the foal being born with a birth defect in this case.This would be due to the excessive recycling of genes not going very well with sexual reproduction. (Sexual reproduction is all about picking the best genes, or so I like to think:twilightblush:) However as you may deduce they would only be extremely similar at least some of them would necessarily differ also in the probability of amount and order in which they are found in a certain population as 3701714 pointed out. Particularly the ones located in the X and Y chromosomes.(They not only determine gender traits just so you know).:derpytongue2:

Finally, how I disagree with Bico is with the following statement due to both ponies being of the same species,I believe the odds of this scenarios to be just as likely in this case as with a non-transdimensional partner (hint not very likely at all).

ponies from the different universes couldn't successfully interbreed at all, or that the result would be sterile or a hermaphrodite

...

What have I done?!!!:raritydespair:

Now after all this, looking back at what I have written, I'm shocked I have taken this question so far and that I still plan to maybe take it further.
I blame you Bico, it's all your fault, your comment inspired me.:applejackconfused:

I might just post a thread or two about this.:facehoof:

~Leonzilla

PS:Sorry for any typos, and please keep in mind that this is just my constructive opinion

Comment posted by johnnycajxrt deleted Dec 30th, 2013

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... Well, rule 36 does apply to every character...

... I wonder what would happen if Daring Do met Bold Action?

Continuation plz?:fluttershysad:

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I almost have it done.

Hey, guess what.

"I'm okay with this!"

3706002 Just a lllliiiiiiitle question.

Are you sure you're not Twilight in disguise?

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