She had always been a pony that could be looked up to. Someone who seemed to know exactly what to do in any situation. But history tells time and time again that nopony is invincible.
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Hello? Is... is this thing on? The red light means it's on, right? Or do I... I have to push a button, don't I? Well, which one? There's like ten! The black one? They're all black!
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Dude...I...I need to lift some weights...excuse me
seriously though that was awesome. short, to the point, and packed with emotion told from an appropriate perspective. I have not to this day given a 5/5, (probably because I don't read tons and tons of fics, or I just forget) but you sir have earned it.
Such a sad story. Some part of me likes it though.
Darn you! Tears ensure
Great job
You bastard... I need to... go... do manly stuff...
5 stars... get away from me...
I'm afraid I've used up all my manly tears on other fics. When I started reading fanfiction, a story like this would have had me choking back tears, but for some reason this time I was trying to force myself to produce tears because I felt like I was supposed to. I wanted to cry, but it seems I can't cry about fanfics any more.
That was sad...Great job
uh... shit, I hear the thunder and feel the rain
. Storm must have come... yeah, that's why my face is wet.
Aw, who am i kidding, that last sentence is what made the storm come, the last echoes of the Best pony ever
...that...
That was depressing, but beautiful. Short, but great. I didn't cry, though my heart did crack a little bit. Fantastic one-shot; really love it.
Anyone else hear Mad World playing in the background?
Very touching, very sad too. Great job with this, I loved it. Quite a large impact in just 1.5k words if you ask me, so you did a wonderful job on making every segment count.
Now if you'll excuse me...
That was touching, i've read my little dashie, so i can't really cry anymore tears, my tear sockets are all dried up, but this was awesome. 5/5
-LJ
God fucking DAMNIT brony. I'm 6'2". I weigh 230 lbs. I work as a security guard. I've been STABBED at work, my immediate reaction being to break both arm and face of the guy who did it. I did not cry.
I AM LEAKING. WHY AM I LEAKING?!
That, was very short and simple yet made my heart crack -applauds- yet i am still seeking something that will make me cry, Its really difficult for me to cry innocent tears, not tears of pain
40607 Have you read My Little Dashie? there may not be death, but you will love, you will cheer, you will cry... that is if you havent read it already. I have gone through the story several times, and each time, my chest is heaving with sobs,, feeling the warmth of all the love that is present. This did have that depressing feel to it, I couldnt listen to any sad music the entire night, because i knew it would make me feel worse. This definitely gets 4 hooves up, but it does not beat the agony from My Little Dashie.
My entire life I have only cried teers of physical pain even when my mom died and I saw the body I didn't shed one teer or even sob yet this makes me want to cry but I don't just from the way you wrote this and the emotions and evrything damm you I need to read all the oc fics I know I guess ill be calling in sick to my soccer coach
That was tear-jerking to say the least.
You go to York too? Small world, so do I. I frequent the Calumet rec hall some days, playing pool.
NEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.......... !
! May you live forever and never stop trying to be as awesome as me!
and thus begins
RAINBOW DASH
5/5 I didn't cry but I felt like crying it's just so emotinal
38426 The Fox Amoore version, and only instrumental. But yes. Yes I did.
How did you go from writing this to writing "Why Didn't Ah Stay at Th' Farm?"
Amazing work, dear sir.
Oh my...
That was beautiful and very very sad T_T. It's got me wondering, what happened to Rainbow Dash, what caused her to pass out in the air like that? Lack of air pressure maybe? Poor Rainbow =(
And that is why anyone with an aviation career should be taught basic atmospheric physics.
Seriously though, this made me sad :( But I think it is good that there are things worth being sad over.
Why did Rainbow go to sleep forever in the sky? Come on why?
OH MY GOD IM. NOT. CRYING.
Who am I kidding, yes I am
It's 4 am. i should be asleep. but i need to go work out or something after this...
i'm seriously wearing a RD shirt right now. about halfway through this, i realized i was clutching the image for dear life.
It's 4 am. i should be asleep. but i need to go work out or something after this...
i'm seriously wearing a RD shirt right now. about halfway through this, i realized i was clutching the image for dear life.
I didn't cry. It was sad, but I didn't cry.
And I feel awful saying this, but Rainbow Dash kind of went down like Boba Fett. Complete badass, capable of doing awesome things, and yet dying in a manner completely unbefitting of their station. If RD had crashed because she didn't pull up in time at breakneck pace, it would have....I dunno, settled I suppose, better than Rainbow Dash making a dumb mistake and plummeting to her death where there should have been capable unicorns, Twilight included, who could have rescued her with a thought.
That's just my opinion.
Still a good story, though. I'll have to keep an eye on your future stories
~FifthAlicorn
This kind of reminds me of a documentary i saw about airplane pilots.
They say that in the final days of WWII, the germans were testing an jet engine plane, the test pilot knew that they werent going to win the war and decided he would go out doing what he liked...
Flying...
The test results say that the "plane exploded", but the witnesses said that he ignored orders and went on an 90 degrees rise, reaching 20,000 meters (4,000 meters more then the maximun allowed).
The plane was said to reach the ground 3 minutes latter, which means that the pilot not only didnt try to avoid the crash, but in fact accelerated.
Rainbow Dash passad out , wich means she didnt have how to avoid the crash, but I am sure she was happy, seeing the curvature of the planet.
She flew higher then any pegasus ever had...
I liked this fic. Thanks for the contribution.
Manly tears were shed
52306 If you read the later Star Wars novels, you'd know that Boba Fett didn't die. Ah, but that's beside the point. I admit, your argument is fairly logical. The thing was, RD was unconscious, having passed out from the high altitude. She couldn't have pulled up even if she wanted to.
The way I looked at it was that, despite having finally flown with the Wonderbolts, she still felt as if she had something to prove. And of course, there's the allure of the sky, which no one's immune to. I could have put it in RD's perspective during that part, and shown what was going through her head, but that would have ruined the effect, and I prefer leaving others to draw their own conclusions. Besides, Twilight mentioned in Lesson Zero that most magic was line-of-sight based, and it's hard to get a clear shot at an object falling at terminal velocity.
49924 Yes, it was lack of air pressure. She went too high, and passed out from sudden-onset hypoxia. Simple overconfidence.
Short, but I cried. Thank you.
Fuck. I knew this would destroy my composure
I'll just go back to my corner now
I ...it.....um....
ok im dun. But can u change the title to I'll Fly Higher plz. It would make it perfect.
194098 Hmm. Yeah, I'll do that. Blue Feathers was just for want of a better name anyway.
YAY!! there everything feels right.
well sorta
Gawd that was sad, but I couldn't cry, I give it a 5/5 and I'm sure that if I actually had tears left from whatever I sheded them from, I would of sheded them all here
That, my friend, was one of, if not the, most touching stories I've ever read. If you'll excuse me, I need to go to my jet and shoot stuff to feel more manly
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FUCK. I'm a MASSIVE Scootaloo and RD fan. Fuck. Feee-uck. Now I'm crying in the middle of first period Biology, and everyone's staring at me. FUCK. On a scale of 1 to 10, with 1 being crap and 10 being amazing, this rates a 178. Now go fuck yourself, you made me cry.
287112 Not to sound like an insensitive prick, but...that's why you don't read sadfics in biology. Meiotic division isn't exactly tearjerker material.
291086
No, I know. I just make stupid decisions sometimes. And holy crap, that's actually what we we're doing!
Dude - I read this again, simply because I remembered it as Blue Feathers and wondered 'What the hell is this thing doing in my favourites??'
Then I read it, and I remembered, and I cried again!
Well done, you not-nerd you.
- Midnight Specter
i almost shed manly tears!
good story!
Just...just awesome, man.
Excuse me...
that... was beautiful
i dident cry, but somehow I feelyou deserve my tears...*shead single manly tear*
i was bawling!!