Moon Dancer is pretty much content. Old friends back, getting new ones, having parties, all while still having her studies. But there's still something missing, in the form of the mare who made her realize that there's more to life than dusty old books.
Great start to a great story
Can't wait for more
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Thanks! Glad you liked it
Don't worry, there's more to come.
wow another great chapter I just love this ship can't wait for more keep up the great work
Great chapter
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Thanks
Hmm... the first three chapters serve as an interesting prologue. We have now setup the plot to attempt to answer the questions in this chapter.
Because this is the chapter that has the ball rolling at this stage, it is also what earns the like from me for this story. Naturally this too shall be tracked.
Great chapter can't wait fore more
Great chapter
I always knew Moon Dancer was a Twilight's fangirl.
I hope a Moon Dancer Character Tag will come soon.
Friend Zoned, the painful shot down of all shot downs.
You became a princess, a few months later you got your kiss on.
Keeping a secret to your friends is one thing but keeping it to your family....
Forgot to tell Spike.
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Well Spike already knew about Moon Dancer's feelings. Moon Dancer told him.
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Great chapter
Incoming high-pitched scream.
I think this chapter caught your editor napping; Twilight's letter is especially weird, though Moon Dancer's reads oddly too.
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Yea, I don't have an editor. The weird letters are all me .
I just have no idea how to do them. Probably because I've never actually written a letter before. Do you have any tips? I would love to improve.
I really should get an editor, shouldn't I?
It seems that you two are the only two who ever comment.
6753234 Do you still need one? I am Editor-for-Hire Specialization: Spelling.
*moonlight intensifies*
Has Twilght ever show her owl to Moon Dancer?
Another great chapter keep up the great work
Sweet capter. Will you continued this story?(It been a long time since you update. Don't push. Just ask)
Hold those pose!
I'll take the magic.
Well that wasn't great, but i like this fic.
Good luck on your future works
Well done so far. I look forward to reading more
Moondancer has her tag now
6697677 this story need moondancer tag(now that fimfiction has one ). Add please so people can easily find your story.
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«Clears my throat»
I have a heart song message for Flash Sentry,from Twilight Sparkle...
Song by Katy Perry,edited by me.
"I kissed a mare and I liked it
The taste of her cherry chap stick
I kissed a mare just to try it
I hope my boyfriend don't mind it
It felt so wrong
It felt so right
Don't mean I'm in love tonight
I kissed a mare and I liked it
I liked it"
Luckily, she was marefriends with the literal princess of love and tolerance.
Hey now...Your gonna anger Cadence if you decide to give her shtick to another alicorn. Love and Fertility are her department, friendship is twilights.
I'd say learning as a second for twilight but celestia has a school and takes personal students...so unsure who gets that.
Luna at least is established as Night and Dreams. I have fertility to Cadence because she is the only alicorn MOTHER and she gave birth to an ALICORN as well...
Good grief..what kind of genes do the sparkle family have...? their daughter was the Element of Magic,Celestias Pupil, and became a alicorn,and their son became captain of the royal guard,married an alicorn,and gave his parents an alicorn granddaughter....
"Welcome"
... "To jurassic park"
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I just assumed Moon Dancer mentioned it in her private letter to Spike.
They’re practically twins. I want to see a story where they are actually twins. If not, I’m putting that in my Star Trek MLP series just because it’s an interesting idea.
Since when did twilight get Cadance’s job?
Poor spike, always left out of group activities.
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Actually, if you're still ok and active, I could use some collaboration help as well.
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yeah, i am
send me a pm, I'll see what I can do :)