Moondancer and Twilight spend a night together underneath the stars.
Note: This is from Moondancer's perspective.
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I Like Pie
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Not terrible but way to rushed...
Thumbs up anyway!
It's a cute story, but it's a little rushed. I feel like if it went a bit slower, perhaps have a tad more conflict leading up to Moondancer's confession, it might have made things a little better.
Overall, however, I liked the story! It was adorable, fun, and it made me smile. And that's all I can really want from someone else's story. So bravo!
Well it could do with a bit more pacing, but it's short and sweet. :)
Overall, thumbs up ;)
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What this guy said. Also, I really doubt Twilight loves Moondancer in the episode. Or rather I completely believe the opposite, since she didn't even remember her name. So, maybe if we got some scenes leading up to this to show Twilight growing closer to her again, so we could buy Twilight returning her feelings, it would help.
You need add a Moondancer tag.
That’s probably the most realistic non-mane 6 character reaction to acceptance I’ve ever seen.