Twilight's just gotten back to Ponyville after amending her friendships with her oldest friends. She's happy about that, but still there's something nagging at her. If she didn't know better, Moondancer was more pained about Twilight coming to the party then any friend had a right to be. Of course, when Moondancer comes to her with the full truth, Twilight is left with a hard choice on her hooves. And it might just take a bit of advice from her mentor to make up her mind...
Contains Moondancer/Twilight shipping and motherly Celestia. Takes place after Amending Fences.
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No, i like it. I like the fact that she was able to figure it out on her own instead of having to be told by moondancer. Broke the mold for me.
Remind me to come back to this in a few days. You've got an interesting start, but the story feels pretty awkward.
7193015 Well, to be fair romance and/or sad stories are not my strong suite. There's a reason I stick to comedy and adventure tales.
Again, another favorite!
I figured I'd pick up a few of your shorter stories to get a hang of your style and I've found that I'm really liking it!
I disagree with this! Great job, and as always, keep up the good work! ~
7881595 Trust me, my longer stories are where I really excell in my opinion, as the romance can be dragged out and feel a bit more realistic, and I can tell stories with plot twists a plenty.
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I'm going to start 'Going Deep Under'knowing I probably won't sleep for a few hours anyway, I'll make sure to let you know how I like it, as far as what I've read I only expect greatness
Sincerely,
7881631 Hope you enjoy it, and if you ever need advice on insomnia just come to me, as I suffered under the damn thing's curse for months. Slept normally for years, and then at the beginning of last summer it happened. It's only been in the last few months that I've been able to sleep normally.
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Goddesses almighty, my usually restless and shy cats are both on my sides while I have a blanket on, I don't want to move them because they rarely are so stationary, it's like 90 degrees under my blanket with the window open, I'll die of a heat stroke before anything. Anywho I'll stop pestering you for today and hopefully survive the night. ~