Definitely Dating this Pinkie

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Pinkie accompanies Twilight to the world of the humans.

Unofficial sequel to Not Dating this Pinkie since the author knows nothing about the existence of this story. Loved his story and Twinkie in general so felt like doing a fun Twinkie story.

Language may be suggestive, but this one is clop free gents and ladies.

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SecretAgentPlotTwist #1 · Oct 28th, 2016 · · ·

Ah, just when you think you've escaped your past, it comes back to get you.
Certainly wasn't expecting to see this randomly, and boy did it bring me back. Not dating Pinkie was the first fic I wrote when I decided to get back into writing over a year ago. And while I can't personally read over it again without cringing, it has happy memories, and I'm glad you liked it enough to write an unofficial sequel to it.
And a pretty good one at that. While your pacing and writing needs some cleaning up, something that every writer has had to do, including myself when I wrote the original, you definitely have a lot of potential as a writer. The fic is sprinkled with bits that show you're ability, the finger joke especially was very funny and clever, and if you can harness your craft more, I expect that there'll be very good stories coming from your way.
Keep up the good work. Seriously, I started off with less skill, but I pushed through and got better, the only way you can get better. You have talent that needs to get out, so just keep writing, reading, and learning. Hope to see even better from you. And while this is a bit too suggestive for my tastes, it definitely deserves a like