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Robo Bro
A Canadian brony who enjoys writing stories. On rare occasions I even post those stories here.
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first comment !
ok in all seriousness this is AWESOME.
I cant wait for the next chapter, post another soon. like and fav.
this is surprisingly well writing and a kewl story, keep it up.
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Thanks, I hope the later chapters are to your satisfaction as well.
This is a good start to what looks like a good story. It'll be interesting to see if he gets his powers back at a later date. And if anything happens to Discord.
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Great to hear that you enjoyed it. I plan on uploading the next chapter in about a week's time. I started writing this quite some time ago (approximately the same time I created this account, actually) and have only just now decided to upload it here, and actually have quite a few more chapters already written. I just decided not to dump all of it on here all at once.
Great start. So the story of racist ponies and this guys eventual hatred towards ponies continue. I hope he isn't a doormat and actually tries to fight back. Ending with proving the ponies wrong, somehow getting powers when he turns back into a Human, and beating the shit out of Discord.
keeping an eye on this one looks good so far,
It's an interesting story so far, and things are getting progressively worse for the the guy finding himself in the body of a changeling and be right at the doorstep of of a famous pony who is know for her strength and is swish in making her opinions about others. The best option that I can think of for him to do would be at the moment that he see Applejack charging at he should just bely-up and scream out loud that he surrender. The is the distinct possibility that that his skull will be splattered before he has the chance to otter these words, but it's a chance that worth taking if it mean that he will have the chance to explain himself to them and maybe he won't put in the Canterlot dungeon for the rest of his new changeling life. But that would be too easy, seeing that seeing that Discord is 'reformed' and he has a hotline to the Mane Six that would probable make the situation calming down too soon get him back home way too soon if Discord is gilt-trip in getting him back home and the story to short. I would imagine that Chrysalis would wand to clam him as one of her own and will probably try to subvert his will and that the opportunity of being close to the Mane Six to get something from them or to be a Trojan horses for something more sinister for Equestria.
Oh my gosh YES. I will definitely follow this. There may be many 'human in Equestria as a changeling' fics, but this stands out. Bravo, keep up the good work!
This is, admittedly, an interesting start. Discord seems quite a bit put out for being slighted and rather vindictive, but it's still a very interesting start. Seems like our protagonist doomed himself with that sarcastic quip though. Object lesson about letting powerful individuals, regardless of the possibility of being a figment, say their piece?
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Yeah, being so flippant towards what is essentially the embodiment of chaos is probably not the best of plans, especially if said embodiment has a history of being rather morally questionable.
6683395 I mean not good in a since that it is not good that AB just run for her life because of no resin but at the same time for resins because of happenings in the show! I love the story! Keep writing it!!!
I hope that you keep putting more chapters out. Also do you need any changeling OCs? Because if you do you can use my hive.
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I have every intention of posting more of this story. I haven't finished writing it, but I do have ten more chapters already written, though I suspect I will make considerable changes to some of those chapters before I put them up here. As I said in an earlier comment, I plan on posting a chapter more or less once a week until I either run out of chapters or decide that the next chapter needs to be rewritten.
I don't think I'll need any changeling OC's from you as I already have a few of my own coming later in the story, but thanks for the offer.
6684738 Ok. But do you want to know my changeling OC? I can give you the description of them if you want it, for, you know, future reference.
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Feel free to send me a private message about it and I'll keep it in mind.
6684832 Ok.
ohh this is good. Moar please
Karma is quick to strike our hapless hero. Pretend to be Pinkie? Two events later meet Pinkie. Emotionally manipulate a mare? Two events later be emotionally manipulated by a mare. Poor colt.
Please don't make this guy a doormat. He really needs to man up.
Interesting start. Let's hope Twilight doesn't put our hapless human on a examination table... or that Pinkie stands up for him.
There's not enough doormats. I love it! Not everyone has to have confidence, I think victor is a great character because he shows weakness, but not the inability to work towards perceived goals.
ohhh curse you cliffhanger endings. moar now!
I really like this story so far. 
Well then... I can think of a few more possibilities for our MC. And even if it's a changeling, Discord was still pretty vicious to said victim.
And sorry pinkie, but MC has a point. Your friends here is being pretty mistreated just for being a changeling, with very little benefit of doubt being given.
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Yeah, the MC is being treated pretty poorly. The mane six don't mean to be so cruel to him, they're primarily just scared of another changeling invasion. They're mostly trying not to mistreat him too much....well, except for Rainbow Dash. She's going a bit far. Not that the others' intentions and fears change the fact that he has been mistreated. I certainly wouldn't want to be in his shoes, that's for sure.
As for Discord....well, he's pretty new at the whole good guy routine at this point in the timeline and hasn't quite gotten the hang of how to act like one. He's got a long way to go, but at least he's trying.
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Edit: Never mind missread
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Awww....now not knowing what you had said is going to gnaw at me forever!
the poor guy cant catch a break can he
this story is fantastic. More please 
LOTS more 
God I really want to bitch slap Rainbow Dash. Looks like his only allies at this time are Fluttershy and Luna.
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I thought that in the second chapter Pinkie said she had no idea about an invasion, but she rather just did know Chrysalis's name. I was calling you out that the invasion happened in the 3rd chapter but not in the 2nd But I misread, it has already happened.
I can see our changeling friend staying with Pinkie soon. (and crazy hijinks ensuing while they're together)
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Yeah, he really can't. I could probably rename the story "Human in Equestria Has Bad Stuff Happen to Him" and nobody would call me out on the name being inaccurate. They might complain about how it's a lousy name, though.
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That would have been a huge contradiction and I would have been terribly embarrassed. Not that I'm above contradictions cropping up in my stories, I actually caught one in chapter two a few days after I posted it and removed it, not that you guys would have been able to notice it was a contradiction for a few chapters yet. One of the magnitude you're speaking of I'd like to think I don't do, at the very least not so soon after I established that which is being contradicted.
Why does Discord call the changeling HER ?
edit: oh...
why did Discord do that ?
good chap
I am a fellow fanfiction writer, and while that doesn't mean much, I would like to say that I really enjoy how you are handling this story.
I was worried the story would basically end in chapter 3. It would have been too easy. Instead you got me curious as to why the main character's problem wasn't resolved. I will definitely be reading future installments for what is revealed next.
Also, I feel it is unfortunate that many will think this is a clop fic just because the sex and mature tag. It is possible to use sex and the teen tag, but that is if you don't actually describe much of anything.
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Oh I agree, it would have been much too easy to end the story at chapter three, but Victor really couldn't be that lucky, he has a lot more he's going to go through before this is over. While I didn't know a lot of what I wanted to do with the story when I first started writing it, one thing I knew for sure was that I didn't want to use Discord as the reason for his appearance in Equestria. As far as methods of inter-dimensional transportation go, the only thing more cliched in a HIE than having Discord being responsible is to not bother explaining at all. I intentionally used him as a red herring, I played on the often used expectation of Discord being responsible to misdirect my readers. I have nothing against stories that use Discord as nothing says you can't have a good HIE story using that cliche, I just thought it would be more fun to do the misdirection.
Your praise may not mean a lot when you look at the grand scheme of things, but I am still gladdened to hear it. I can't guarantee that it'll be handled as solidly all the way through, but I shall take the positive reception I've received on these early chapters with pride.
As for people thinking it's a clop story....meh, I'm not going to be too concerned if they do. I've clearly labelled that while it does have sex in it, it's not clop, they only have themselves to blame if they read it looking for such a story. Some will overlook the story instead as they don't want to read clop, but there's not much I can do about that unless I edit out the stuff that bumps it to mature. I'm not adverse to clop myself, and as such am okay with putting a little bit of sex in my stories and feel little desire to censor myself with this particular story.
Ponies are really very species... The possibility of a 'good' changeling is non-existent to them (outside of Pinkie)?
Aside from that, nice chapter. A kiss born window of opportunity
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Thanks, glad you liked it.
To be fair, it was Bon Bon he ran into, who I established as being not the nicest of ponies. If I recall, even in the canon of the show, she often wasn't very nice insofar as much as a minor background character can be. Excepting of course episode 100, which would have aired after I wrote this. Also, in her defense, a changeling had just tried to trick her into thinking she was her best friend, there is cause to be suspicious.
I think several other ponies would have been a little less quick to judge as bad, even if not quick to trust. The MC just has really bad luck.
6763509 Once you start the bad luck ball rolling, it's hard to make it stop. And RD is a very loud and forceful voice who's somehow making sense. Stop making sense RD!
More!
Well well well, this will end in, well, chaos.
Probably about time to run into the Everfree and hide out at Zecora's. Or panic and not think fast enough, the more likely option really.
Damnit, Victor, you had your chance. Should've made Pinkie Pie promise not to let any harm come to you. However, given that Rarity sort of manipulated Pinkie herself, we'll see how this plays out.
I'd say Pinkie took a piercing blow to the head with Victory pointing out what her friends all did to him as why he didn't trust her with his being a Changeling.
I caught on to the discrepancy between what Discord was calling her and what Fluttershy was calling him early on, so I was expecting that scene near the end.
Gee, given Discord says to cast a spell and everything to figure out Victory's status, it's pretty obvious he has a trick up his sleeve. Too bad Twilight doesn't think outside the box very much
Man, one would think Shining Armor and Cady would have come up with more countermeasures than just increased security after the Changeling invasion. No magical countermeasures, for that matter. Chrysalis seems to have been busy plotting and coming up with new things too, being able to change the colour of her magic for one.
damnit MC, stop being such a doormat
Even if Twilight thinks Victor's not from the Equestria Girls world (which he's not), there's still enough details that he should know about. Tell her about computers, the internet and cars, and see if that'll do it.