Victor just had a dream about Discord and turning into a changeling, and for some reason when he wakes up he hasn't changed back. Now stuck in Equestria, he must do his best to convince the ponies he's not a threat and find a way to get home.
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good chap
I am a fellow fanfiction writer, and while that doesn't mean much, I would like to say that I really enjoy how you are handling this story.
I was worried the story would basically end in chapter 3. It would have been too easy. Instead you got me curious as to why the main character's problem wasn't resolved. I will definitely be reading future installments for what is revealed next.
Also, I feel it is unfortunate that many will think this is a clop fic just because the sex and mature tag. It is possible to use sex and the teen tag, but that is if you don't actually describe much of anything.
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Oh I agree, it would have been much too easy to end the story at chapter three, but Victor really couldn't be that lucky, he has a lot more he's going to go through before this is over. While I didn't know a lot of what I wanted to do with the story when I first started writing it, one thing I knew for sure was that I didn't want to use Discord as the reason for his appearance in Equestria. As far as methods of inter-dimensional transportation go, the only thing more cliched in a HIE than having Discord being responsible is to not bother explaining at all. I intentionally used him as a red herring, I played on the often used expectation of Discord being responsible to misdirect my readers. I have nothing against stories that use Discord as nothing says you can't have a good HIE story using that cliche, I just thought it would be more fun to do the misdirection.
Your praise may not mean a lot when you look at the grand scheme of things, but I am still gladdened to hear it. I can't guarantee that it'll be handled as solidly all the way through, but I shall take the positive reception I've received on these early chapters with pride.
As for people thinking it's a clop story....meh, I'm not going to be too concerned if they do. I've clearly labelled that while it does have sex in it, it's not clop, they only have themselves to blame if they read it looking for such a story. Some will overlook the story instead as they don't want to read clop, but there's not much I can do about that unless I edit out the stuff that bumps it to mature. I'm not adverse to clop myself, and as such am okay with putting a little bit of sex in my stories and feel little desire to censor myself with this particular story.
Man, one would think Shining Armor and Cady would have come up with more countermeasures than just increased security after the Changeling invasion. No magical countermeasures, for that matter. Chrysalis seems to have been busy plotting and coming up with new things too, being able to change the colour of her magic for one.
What did the kiss do ?
Go Chryssie go! Though I question a single kick being enough to completely crush a changeling's skull, unless it was propped up against something unmoving, like a wall.
Well, there goes my hope for Chrysalis being portrayed in a positive light...![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
Well, that was brutal![:rainbowderp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowderp.png)
That was an unexpectadly brutal chapter! Not that it's bad, I was just surprised. I should have read the tags.
Very gritty and adult Equestria. Poor MC landed in a tough one on hard mode.