Ponies are really very species... The possibility of a 'good' changeling is non-existent to them (outside of Pinkie)?

Aside from that, nice chapter. A kiss born window of opportunity

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Thanks, glad you liked it.

To be fair, it was Bon Bon he ran into, who I established as being not the nicest of ponies. If I recall, even in the canon of the show, she often wasn't very nice insofar as much as a minor background character can be. Excepting of course episode 100, which would have aired after I wrote this. Also, in her defense, a changeling had just tried to trick her into thinking she was her best friend, there is cause to be suspicious.

I think several other ponies would have been a little less quick to judge as bad, even if not quick to trust. The MC just has really bad luck.

6763509 Once you start the bad luck ball rolling, it's hard to make it stop. And RD is a very loud and forceful voice who's somehow making sense. Stop making sense RD!

More!

damnit MC, stop being such a doormat

Even if Twilight thinks Victor's not from the Equestria Girls world (which he's not), there's still enough details that he should know about. Tell her about computers, the internet and cars, and see if that'll do it.

This was very funny. I like it that He/she was lured asleep at the end.

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Ah...I knew this would happen sooner or later. I have a habit of occasionally missing the blatantly obvious, and you've just pointed out a perfect example of me doing so. Thanks for that. I'll have to make some modifications later on to fix this issue. Fortunately, this is far from something that'll break the story.

He only just learned that Equestria Girls actually happened, he can't think too clearly thanks to sleep deprivation, and he panicked because of Rainbow Dash's antagonism. That's the story I'm going with on why he hasn't mentioned such things yet, and I'm sticking to it. Absolutely nothing to do with my incompetence as a writer, no sirree! *innocent whistle*

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Glad to see that I wasn't mistaken in thinking that this was a funny chapter when I wrote it. The story's still not a comedy, but it is nice to have some funny moments here and there.

6764703 That's ok. I wounder how long He/she will be asleep for?

thought rose up like a skyscraper in my mind, built upon the foundation of three years of unhealthy obsession with candy coloured ponies, two days of soul crushing stress and one long night of sleep deprivation.
It was a bad idea.
It was a terrible idea.
It was the best fucking idea I’ve ever had in my life.

Yup, that's what all of mine are like jkjk

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Exchanged saliva and disgusted Garnet Targe because she finds Chrysalis repulsive? It didn't really do anything that any other (unwanted) kiss wouldn't have. it was just a kiss, albeit one that involved biting of the lip and an unwilling participant.

Twi has to have a truth spell, or some kind of mental magic that can verify HIS story. I am amazed nobody has thought of an actual exchange yet -- him into the female changeling's body and her into his body.

Also it is too mad to not be true.

You just used Bon Bon as a patsy... I love you.

I LOVED the Bon-bon distraction... you got a pretty good chuckle out of me on that one.

Pretty sure I picked up on the twist there. There's no chaos magic residue because it was never Discord who turned him into a changeling. He did that himself, in his dream. Discord just pulled him out of it.

6952335 Didn't Chryssi feel something peculiar, that made her lose consciousness in the last chapter? Of course, that could just be a red herring...

I grabbed both sides of her face and lunged forth, locking lips with her and pushing my tongue inside as her mouth opened in shock.

Rainbow makes me want to smack her upside the head.

I find it amusing that ponies are much more eager to kill than changelings.

7335104 what do you want to smack her upside the head with, a magazine, or a hammerfisttse4.mm.bing.net/th?id=OIP.M61351439c965f7e45d0a53b9f17cfba7o0&pid=15.1

I can't help but wonder why she doesn't prove she's human? She knows things about the human world she couldn't learn anywhere else, like conventional physics and orbital mechanics, or what a cellphone is and how it works, or the internet, or the schooling system. Or cars. Or famous TV shows like star trek. Or heck, even constellations or basic anatomy! And twilight has memory spells that she could go in and confirm everything!