I'm a girl living in Ashley, New Milton. Loved mlp ever since it started showing and got to learn about these fanfic in October 2013. (Also I have dyslexia, so if I make mistakes sorry)
What do you get somebody who doesn't like Hearths Warming?
Apple Bloom is told a story about someone called Discord who doesn't like Hearths Warming and is said to have no heart thanks to his pranks.
So she want's to get him something to cheer him up, the trouble is she doesn't know what to get him...
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It was a cute story, but it could use an editor. There were a lot of spelling and grammar errors to iron out. Other than that, there were several times where you forgot to change Sophie's name to Apple Bloom, which greatly confused me, and you called Big Mac Mack and Jack, once each. You also called Fluttershy Mother Nature once, but if anything, that fit her character enough that it didn't bother me. The Equestria Girls tag fits, I think, though I'd change Spike's name, since Spike is actually a dog in Equestria Girls. Lastly, it seems mighty creepy to me that Discord (likely a middle-aged man) wants to date Fluttershy (a teenager).
6741384 I first wrote this to go to be a ROTG story using them as the characters - so sorry about that I'll try and change it.
And who say's Discord's a middle aged man in this? He could be mid twenties or something.
Either way thanks for the read, and the comment. Hope you liked it
6741384 Or maybe Fluttershy's in her mid twenties (she is the oldest of the main six)
6741567 I did like the story. Addressing the topic of discussion, A) Discord has a child and gray hair (with a single streak of black), suggesting an older age (plus, people don't really make Grinch-like legends about mid-twenty-year-olds), and B) Fluttershy is in high school in Equestria Girls, so she's likely not in her twenties.
6741594 In Equestria Girls, the Mane Six and the CMC are in high school, so AB is definitely older than 12, and Flutters is definitely younger than 20. Maybe you should add an AU tag on here. Good story though.
Due to equestrian girls, the mane six should be 17-18. Maybe 19. The crusaders should be at least 14, maybe 15. But still great story. Really got me in the hearths warming mood
That was a great story, but why did Screwball have to be close to Apple Bloom's age? In the official Cartoon/Comics she's a Full-Grown Mare, so why not have her be closer to Applejack or Big Mac's Ages in This story?
I mean Seriously, why do sooo many people actually believe that Screwball is just a Filly?
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Thanks
And to answer your question - in the clips in the show where we see her (s2 ep 2 and s5 ep 26 [Discord's Universe] She is infact a filly
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Take a Closer Look at Screwball in the Upper Right Corner Pocket} http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/File:Discord_with_the_princesses_in_clown_costumes_S5E26.png
Notice the Longer Legs, the Longer Neck, the Longer Torso, the Smaller Head? That is the Body Frame Design for a typical MLP:FiM Full Grown Mare, it's just that her first appearance made it harder to tell because of the position she had her body in while she was flying around, and her Long Mane didn't help much either.
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I suppose...
But i still like to place her as a filly
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That's nice & all for you, but I prefer the more canonical fact that Screwball is a Grown Mare, because otherwise it wouldn't work out with the idea that Screwball is basically what one would consider to be a "Super Pinkie Pie".