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When Queen Celestia sent Fluttershy to be a nanny to King Discord's five daughters, Fluttershy was thrilled because she had lost her first job. But Discord and the little princesses were estranged with each other. Can Fluttershy help them become a real family again? Or will jealous Lady Chrysalis get rid of Fluttershy? Fluttercord

Cover art done by ChaosQueen

Chapters (32)
Comments ( 361 )

I'd like to read this, but trim your short description. It's not all showing on the front page.

I trimmed the description. Sorry, I did not realize it was too long.

So I guess the "Twilight Series" and "Fifty Shades of Grey" aren't your favorite stories?

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No, I do not dislike or like Twilight series or Fifty Shades of Grey. Twilgiht Sparkle's views on those books do not reflect my views on them. They are purely Twilight Sparkle's own opinion.

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Thought it was that. I just thought I'd ask.
I finished reading this last night. I :heart: it so far, can't wait to read more. :twilightsmile:

I just noticed this new feature of the site, where we can't see the dislikes/likes of a story until we actually like/dislike it!

I just liked this story!

IT'S AWESOME!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!

just to get this straight...
Sunset Shimmer is Discord's wife?

Then, how is discord going after Chryssalis and then falling in love with Fluttershy?

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!

6261690 No, I must have made a typo error. Sunset is supposed to be the wise mare (pony equivalent to the wise man) and is someone who writes records for Discord so he can keep track of Royal and political stuff. Discord is single.

This story is so cute!! I can't wait to see what happens next.

OMG this is so kawaii! PLEASE update soon! I need more!!!!!!

Awe. Such a sweet chapter. :) keep up the good work.

EEEK!!!!! I can't wait for the Royal Family to meet Fluttershy! I can just imagine Sweetie Belle being like; Are you single? Just like Agnes in Despicable Me 2 when she meets Lucy

6290141 I remember that scene from Despicable Me 2! That was cute! Maybe, I'll use that line for the next chapter! ;-)

wow this is such a great story! Can't wait for more chapters:twilightsmile:

"You're lucky," Applejack said. "With Miss Lyra, it was a snake!"

Evan if it had been a snake I'm sure Fluttershy could handle it. :ajsmug:
Probably too early to think about but, I wonder if Screwball will have a love interest like in "The Sound of Music" or "The King and I" and if they will be singing? :twilightsmile:

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Haha if they start singing I will die of laughter! Haha that would be hilarious, I can't really see Screwball or Babs Seed singing haha!

I love this so much! I see a mixture of Sound of Music, Mary Poppins, Cheaper by the Dozen, and the fanfiction, Love or Power by atomicpuffin. I look forward to more!

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Comment posted by Mister Phoenix deleted Aug 17th, 2015

I'm'm wondering is this is base off a real story or is this just your idea and if it is based off a real story what is it called or is just called if you don't mind me asking because if it is a real story I would like to read it

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I got the idea of the story from The Sound of Music Also inspired from the King and I and Jane Eyre .
The Sound of Music was a true story. Same with the King and I (only more inaccurate than the former). I do not know about Jane Eyre, though.

Uncle Flim and Flam? Oh, no! *grabs popcorn*

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Yeah, hahahaha hahahaha! Thier roles will be similar to the role of Uncle Max from The Sound of Music

Comment posted by ChaosQueen deleted Aug 21st, 2015

Love it! But I'm curious, did you get DF's permission to use her character?

6340524 I just asked her. Sorry, I thoguht Mothball was a canon background character, rather than a fan-made character.

Hehe, the Twilight and 50 Shades of Grey references were a nice touch (though you might want to rethink the mention of "sex" and the rating).

Hmm, there seem to be a lot of typos (you might want to read through this). Discord seems a little too...orderly.
Nevertheless, I'm intrigued.

Lately, she had heard about mares who could not find good jobs, either turn to servitude or worse, prostitution!

Yeah, you might want to change the rating now.

MOON DANCER??? I was wondering who Discord's dead wife would be, but MOON DANCER??? Did NOT see that coming!

I liked the chapter, can't wait to read more.
observation: l see you've changed the rating from everyone to teen and added an extra category. :twilightsmile:

6349680 Just as surprised as you. I don't think it has been done before. :twilightsmile:

6349680 I picked her because I thought she had some of the fillies' characteristics (Apple Bloom's fur and red hair color, Screwball and Sweetie Belle's purple highlights).

6349648 I changed the rating and added Sex tag in my story. Sorry about that. :-(

6353998 I was suggested to do it for safety reasons.

i need more chapters!!!

Update soon!

Please more, I'm sitting here begging like a dog!:fluttercry:

6373072 I agree!!!!
MORE CHAPTERS!!!

This is SO beautiful!!!

I want to know how Fluttershy and Discord fall in love? Fluttercord!!

:rainbowkiss: So adorable! Keep going with this story, it's flabulous! :pinkiehappy:

Uh...you do know schnitzel is meat, right? DO THE PONIES EAT MEAT IN THIS STORY???

I love how you fixed the song up here! :pinkiehappy: Great job! I can't wait for the rest of the story!

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Man how could I mess that up? :facehoof:
I'll change it.

Is the sex tag for language or are they gonna do it?

6349680 Um... Moondancer has yellow fur in, which media, again?

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