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Soren Mercer
I read horse words. I write horse words. I sometimes even... read more horse words.
Soren Mercer
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I have really enjoyed this so far and look forward to seeing where it goes
6645312 Cool, thank you. We'll see when I get along to the next chapter.
I like your angle!
6651289 in what way? Is it something specifically about the main character, his developing relationship(s) or...
Thank you for the support though!
Thanks to everyone who's favouriting this to their pages. It shows me that people are actually reading this.
This looks promising
bed not best
6688425 Thank you for pointing that out, change had been made.
Nice story, but the thing with spike seems a little unnecessary, think about it, spike doing that is very unlikely, spike already has a crush on rarity and probably sorn his self to her, and then spike is a baby Dragon, therefore probably not going through prubity or any other dragon hormone changy thingy (ie. The greed growth) and with the human (name plz) being in a world where the male to female ratio is... questionable, a little guy to guy is what he prolly needs. And Weiss can have a little pen-pal
6704671 I've got a bit more for explaining Spike's actions coming up shortly. Since the only indication of where in the canon I'm at is the Season 5 finale, I'm playing loosely with Spike's maturity. As for the main character's name, I'm purposely leaving one out as a challenge for me.
Edit: Let's do it this way, I'll continue watching the comments and if more and more people start requesting a name for the main character, then I'll consider giving him one. Or I'll just call him Anon or something...
6705876 Asking the comments isn't really reliable considering that this story (as of me writing this) is only getting 2-4 comments a chapter
6706018 Still is the best option i've got atm... that i'm aware of anyways.
After reading it all in one day, i can say it sure looks interesting. I just hope it doesn't fall flat on it's face.
6714829 you and me both. :T
It's nice to see that you are taking my advice about the spike thing
6719135 What kind of public author would I be to ignore the reader's opinions?
6719265
About 60 of fimfiction
'dead' should be 'death'.
It can't be "at least 95% self-created materials" because the lumber is at least 90% of the total materials used. That's the whole idea behind carpentry: shaping wood!
Should probably be "a day" instead of "a days".
More on the material thing. I believe you meant '95% self-processed', because unless it comes from your own body, you can't make raw materials. You can only refine or shape them.
6720892 All the edits! :D thanks though, I appreciate it.
6721805 No problem! Some have been salty about it in the past. I've even been blocked once for pointing out edits!
6721820 Wow. Well I'll use this as an opportunity to let any of my readers know to feel free to leave edits.
I don't think I saw any spelling errors, or whatever, in this chapter. GG.
6725297 Woo! Progress!
And on top of that, I just realized I'm going to have to edit the tags for the next chapter...
6725324 Like teen to mature? Or maybe add a ''gore'' tag?
6725530 Not entirely sure how a Gore tag would fit in this, but I was mostly talking about adding a Romance tag... Ugh was trying to avoid it like the plague.
Noice m8, I hope to see some *ahem* "stuff" between Sunset and Captan
Tchin Tchin
6728249 Because I'm trying to avoid turning this into some kind of clop-fic and keep this rated T, if I do find a spot that such activities would fit, I'll post it as a separate thing elsewhere while I ensure that nothing important to the plot happens.
Well I read the whole thing so far, looking good.
Have a thumbs up.
The first chapter feels too rushed. I'll still read it though.
6764443 I appreciate the feedback. I had to write the first chapter so that it could establish that Captain was in Equestria, even then the admins didn't like it and so I had to write the second chapter with it to publish it. So yeah, I suppose it was rather rushed.
Luna's sudden shift in character feels very off. I think this story needs more explanations and a bit more thought into it.
6764536 I shall note that.
this has promise
I'm just wondering if the corporal will show up or not.
6772312 Mmmm We'll see.
I think you meant "severe to me" rather than "sever top me".
6776642 yes, thank you. I'll change that as soon as I'm able.
6776706 'kay. Sounds good!
Oh god yes
6776795 You... gonna be alright bud?
Fanally you put the "tickling the time bomb".
Good Chapter, though I spotted an error
"You’ve you been?"
I think you mean "How have you been?"
Oh shit........
6784663 Oh... Bro, you've still got so much more to get through! :D
6779012 I'm not sure I understand...
I wonder if Red Text is going to be like Deadpool's head voices.
Well war hmm never solved shut but hey it's a last resort right.
I can't help but notice that "Captain" is like the protagonist of American Sniper. Y'know he'll be the guy who takes everyone out with a full clip meanwhile giving his convoy some breathing room. I can see it now and thx for some "reasons" I hope you do make it on the Featured List.
PS: American Sniper best movie about war since "Saving Private Ryan"