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BrokenStar54


Do people even read these?

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Have you ever been forcefully put into a situation in which you are constantly on the run? I have, and it is not fun. I was enjoying myself out on the field then suddenly I am attacked in another world. Life couldn't possibly hate me as much as these horses, right? Right?

Rated dark for future chapters.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 19 )

I'd Say This was edgy, But..

Ghost Rider.



Oh And first.

Awesome chapters you are doing a amazing job i can't wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

"Put you in confinement until I am absolutely sure you won't harm anypony here with your weapons."

Of course! That's why no one like Equestria, because they always imprison new species

Fuck you, that's where!

:twilightsheepish: I loved that part. Keep this story up! You earned a fav!

Comment posted by RSBFclanFTW deleted Jan 21st, 2015

5528015 I know right! Such a shit thing to do. "I don't know anything about you so I'll arrest you until I find out more." Dafuq?

Don't worry, updates are on their way! :yay:

5533297 Yeah, I like that part aswell. I think I got a bit carried away though... anyways, glad you enjoyed it!

are the princesses going to be evil in this story?

5578935 To be honest, I'm not entirely sure, but they will be a little evil. Just a bit :pinkiecrazy: just a bit.

Let me guess..................................Gilda?

5824743 you'll find out next chapter

5826536 *Shrugs* I know but that's my best guess unless it's an OC Griffin.

5525081 you made me giggle :D

........ huh.
Don’t like or dislike, just kind of feel... let down. Though i never really expect much.

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