Lock Light wasn't always an alicorn. He wasn't always King Sombra's son. He didn't always have White Lightning as a brother. But Lock Light was always true to himself.
Come dear reader, and step into a story of trust. A story of love. A story of betrayal, Step into the story of Lock Light, the Liberator of the Crystal Empire!
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I keep getting a Prince of Egypt kind of feeling from this story.
Is that just me or is that where where going?
7484881 That was a big inspiration :)
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Coolio!!!! I can't wait this looks like such a fun story to read!
That was a great read I kinda wished the epilogue was farther in the future like when he was old and written like he was looking back in time
I really like the beginning of the story but once it got to current time it felt like places of the story was being rushed.....
I wish there was more of the story where applejack and lock light slowly started to fall in love and not all at once.....
Although the main background story for lock light I found enjoyable to read, I also liked how you showed the 2 different perspectives on the crystal empire as well as added more to the story than what the show tells us
Awesome story!