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Shocks


time to get off this furry boat

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It happened over a decade ago. The day she was ripped from everything she had ever known, dumped in the wilderness alone and scared. She has since moved on from it, pushing that part of her life away. Now, just when things have once again settled down in her life, fate once again rips her home away from her.

Now, she has only one mission. Labeled a traitor by those who work for their own gain and on the run from a tyrant, she must complete her task, lest she let the memories of her loved ones be trampled on.

Her name is Esdeath.

And she will return to her homeland one day.

But not today.

Today, she secures it's future.


Notes: Displaced Fic. Crossover with Akame Ga Kill.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 39 )

Displaced Fics. Displaced Fics everywhere.

...And that's the problem.

6548258 I hate to disagree but its bad displaced fics that are the problem. I'm not trying to pick a fight, I just think you should remember that there are some good ones out there. Of course, that is not to say that the idea of too much of a good thing is unfounded.

Really akame ga Kill? -sigh-YOU STOLE MY IDEA HOW COULD YOU -CRIES- No seriously though General Esdeth, pretty good idea for a displaced, I myself was thinging Mine or even Leona, but Esdeth is good to, bitch is a one way psyco train headed for death and destruction

6549743 All your ideas are belong to us.

Displaced fics... Oversaturated... its kinda like naruto fics there will always be another the next month or week...

Thought of the day: If con is the opposite of pro... then what is the opposite of progress...

6549732 I just love to hate some Displaced fics. Though I respect the good ones and understand most aren't terrible.

Personally I think the main problem with displaced fics is that most of them rush to the crossover instead of trying to stand on their own.

6550362 Uh decline? Stoppage? Stagnation? Diminished or deterioration? Am I close?

6552666 the joke is the opposite of progress is congress

I am trying to picture an actually armored Esdeath, and it doesn't really work for her character. A woman who is literally a warrior first, female second, and emotional almost never who respects only strength and holds contempt for the weak is a fairly accurate description of the personality of the ice queen known as Esdeath. Hell, after she got her power she started going about in a normal officers dress uniform as she plunged her enemies into the depths of a hellish winter with a swing of her sword as she raced ahead of her troops. Any way, please describe her armor at some point.

6573218 The armor isn't going to be a major factor in the story, as it pretty much won't make much, if any, second appearance. Also, this is a displaced story. Although Esdeath is the MC, it is not the actual Esdeath, thus personality is heavily different.

I was planning on actually using the real Esdeath and make it a true crossover, mostly having her rule along with Sombra as a queen of sorts, but scrapped that idea in favor of this one. Two main points being her whole 'strong crush the weak thing' and the fact that she was tsundere for tatsumi.

6573261 Fair enough. Also, I would more class her as a mild yandere my self, no where near Yuuno Gasai levels of course.

6573363 She actually would have been one of my favorite anime characters if it wasn't for the whole love interest thing. It went against her character so badly. And she even, as a character, admitted it.

I know it was probably the writers trying to say,' Hey, she's not totally into this love thing!' But all it really did was show you they just threw it in there so the MC could have every large breasted woman after him.

Still nowhere near as bad an MC then Kazuto. They literally gave him every female in the show, age and relation be damned.

6573411 True. Though they managed to dodge the problems with harems up until the last episode, and then Tatsumi dies. Also, I think the romance was an attempt at humanizing the ice queen. I say attempt because she was literally a power junkie, and trying to make her be soft was almost painful to watch. Plus the insult to her intelligence when he ran off and suddenly a single Night Raid member showed up every time.

6573468 I was really disappointed when they did try. There are so few truly evil or unredeemable characters in anime, more so for female characters. Esdeath's 'strong crush the weak' attitude was in its own level.

6573494 This is true. Sure, it enhances the drama slightly, but you lose some of the justification for someone to be a complete and utter bastard. Like with Berserk. Spend half the shows length building up Griffith as a decent military officer and lady killer on the side to suddenly switch in the final episode to demon king Griffith who literally sacrificed his troops for power. Then again, Black Lagoon. Your supposed to be cheering for a high octane pistol toting bitch, the straight man who can idly break a dude, and the torture porn making doctor and the schmuck they wound up with.

6573514 Ah Black Lagoon. Now there was a shipping done right.

Good story, but you accidentally put it under kill la kill instead of akame ga kill.

6668089 I didn't add it to anime crossovers.

6668432 idk why it says it was put there, that's how I found it.

6668606 Any user can add a story to a group if they choose to, that's how most terrible fics end up in Absolutely Disgusting and other related groups.

6668610 HA
Thanks, I didnt know that before.

Only two months overdue.

Yep.

Great job mate, we all have been waiting for a new chapter for months.

6549743
I was thinking either Bro or Handsome :P
maybe Docter Stylish? That would be interesting.

TGM

Dude, what the hell happened to your cover art?

6831247 What? I must be missing something here.

6831996 3X the boob, I'm appealing more to my male demographic. :trollestia:

But seriously, it's good on my end, just fimfic being derp.

Comment posted by Vigriff deleted Jan 10th, 2019

I respect the anime version of Esdeath.

Wan is the next chapter coming out

So how many chapters will destroy have

And now I play the waiting game.

An interesting work, wonder what happens next?

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