Huh? Oh hey! Didn't see you there! Considering my eyes cant exactly move at the moment.... Anyways! Nice to have an audience! What? You cant hear me? Thats alright, my mouth cant move anyway. So! Your probably wondering how I got here eh? Well, it involves a convention, a costume, and a very stupid decision. Got some cool gloves out of it though! Eh, ok they're not that cool, well to me anyways. Back to what I was saying...
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What was I saying?
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Eh, it doesnt matter! Because I can feel my prison breaking and my freedom is at hand!
Let freedom ring!!!
Chapters (12)
Ooooh...
Interesting...
*reads*
I may be mistaken, but I just cracked up!
YEEAAAAH!!
KEEP THIS STORY ROLLING!!!!!!! NEVER CANCEL IT!!!!!! OR I WILL FIND YOU!!!!
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4840006 Then that is quite the incentive to continue.
LoHAV detected.
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CLEANSE AND PURGE
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4840990 YOU'RE NOT FUCKING ANGRY ENOUGH TO FUCKING USE THAT PICTURE, YOU COCK-SUCKING CUM-CHUGGER!!!
A WH40K crossover? With what looks like an Angry Marine gauntlet? Aweso- oh, it's a costume fic.
Oh well, let's see if this is any better than the others.
Unoriginal title. Very unoriginal premise. Poor descriptions, and what is being described is completely bland. The dialogue is just as bland. The main character is already completely obnoxious, acts just the same as pretty much every other bland and obnoxious main character in the vast majority of these fics, and I'm sure we're going to have distracting and pointless flashbacks showing what idiot ball was given to Celestia to make her OOC enough to turn him into stone, and I'm sure it will be filled with such witty remarks like calling her sunbutt. I mean, Sunbutt, right? It's clever! Oh I'm so funny.
Huh, sorry for the unintended rant at the end. But, considering how 99% of the characters in these fics tend to call Celestia "Sunbutt" (I guess the characters think they're being funny when it actually just makes them look stupid), so I honestly wouldn't be the least bit surprised to see this guy do the same.
4841947 Well, that was a very blunt review. Not quite sure what to say.
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yay!
First you say it then ya do it. Oh crap
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No, I do fear I'll never be able to top your rage. But you wanna bet I can make you go full Exterminatus with two words?
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Please don't. My rage-meter is running low from all the capslock.
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"spiritual liege"
4842694
*head explodes from sheer rage*
I've noticed a bad tendency for these kind of stories. If there is cursing, there is so much it distracts from the story.
Started reading, it felt like one of those jock kinda fellas telling a story about how he totally banged that cheerleader yesterday.
The F-bombs are kinda distracting in the narrative, and the way the narrator himself addresses the audience is kinda...'keep your distance buddy' inducing for me.
My face was cramped up in an epic frown for at least half a minute when I saw the title of chapter one. Don't make me remember the biggest failure of a returning franchise that butchered my childhood gaming memories
Also quite some grammar and tense errors just made me stop reading altogether, despite me really loving WH40k related stories. Guess not my style in the end.
Interesting. Although I suggest you acquire an editor so that the grammar and punctuation errors, which detract from the story, will be fixed.
-Spirit
Please us spellcheck man, I mean damn man parts were almost painful for me to read because of misspelled words.
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4844639 Ok, went back and spelled checked and edited a few things. Hopefully that looks better. First part lit up like a Christmas tree with all the errors.....
4845361 Great. Can't wait for the next chapter!
There will be violence, right?
Feels kinda rushed, and you need an editor. But otherwise, you're doing pretty well!
I'm assuming that 'Guants' is short for 'Gauntlets' in which case 'Guants' should be 'Gaunts'.
Unless Guants is short for something else and I'm having a major oversight?
4846605 No, your right and I just can't spell. Dam, I need an editor
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No, you're right, and I just can't spell. Damn, I need an editor.
4848094 my point exactly.
NO
We are not fucking doing this shit again
4842005
Crap, I'm sorry about that. I tend to be blunt, but not usually that blunt. For what it's worth, the reason my comment was so blunt is that I really enjoy a good crossover fic (especially if it isn't a fusion), and these costume fics have been one massive disappointment after another, especially since I see one and expect a pretty rare crossover, only to find yet another costume fic. Seeing what looked like a WH40K crossver only for it to be another costume fic just really bothered me, and I took that out on you by leaving a comment that was way more abrasive than I meant it to be.
I still hold the criticism I left in my comment, but I could have (and should have) worded it much better. That was completely wrong of me to take my frustration with these costume fics out on you, and for that I sincerely apologize.
4849076 That's quite alright friend. I myself enjoy a good crossover fic. Also, in fact the fist is a Warhammer 40k fist. It was the closest to what I imagined they looked like in the story.
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Yesss!
Lots of beat-em-up. 
Need more. Must have more.
-Spirit
God damnit Rick...
Anger is over rated. I enjoy doing what others don't expect. Like maybe forgive then have nothing to do with/shun them. Tends to really mess with peoples minds because they keep expecting the revenge/anger anyways.
I'm getting a "Monkey D Luffy" type of feel from your abilities.
Nice use of the "It's my story I can do what I want" card
How many Cosplayers in Equestria stories are we gonna get?
The answer: MORE!
Is the intro going to the be same like any other CiE stories?
The answer: YES!
Is there a chance that there is a similar CiE story to this?
The answer: YES!
Is there a perfectly good reason why this isn't marked as a Crossover?
The answer: NO!
Will the author try to defend the idea that his CiE story isn't a Crossover?
The answer: MOST LIKELY!
4852250 interesting
4852250 Yep to all of your assumption
4852566
Glad someone is willing to understand.
Decent... Perhaps LoHAV will make a comeback yet...
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RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUGHUGHUAUHAUGUAHUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
+ The gauntlets make me think a bit of:
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Christ on a cracker, I can't believe this has six hundred views.
I swear, the only things that get looked at on this site are clop, HiEs, and "comedies" with the big blue random tag. Please keep in mind that I hold no ill will toward this story, just those who read it. That being said, the writer of this Fists of Fury or Something has clearly not learned the ropes of basic grammar (it's called an apostrophe. I'm, it's, they've, he's. Use it).
A man could post his magnum opus on thos site, a story filled with excitement, worldbuilding, intrigue, a gripping plot, and unique characters. It gets tagged "Adventure" because that's what the story focuses on. Then, of course, no one reads it because it doesn't have sex or nonsensical humor advertised in the title and header image. Now don't misunderstand, clopfics can be absolutely brilliant and sensual, and random-tagged fics can still split your sides, but a good 90% of them are poorly written and get by the popularity of the genre alone. It saddens me to think that a site dedicated to litteature can have so little of it.
I apologize, Shockwave1111, for posting this comment on your story. I just cannot comprehend what makes other fics like this so attractive. There are so many things wrong with the above fanfiction, not just in my own opinion, I can give you a few pointers at a later date if you wish.
4857625 Seeing this image, I have to agree they're preety close to what I think!
4855432 Aren't you supposed to be doing something that involves a certain Forgemaster?
4858626 Oh yeah, let's talk about someone else's story on this story's comment section. Way to be rude.
4859849 Yes, quite. Well, anyway, this is quite the humorous story, isn't it, ol' chap?
Hmm. You've made this quite unreadable, which I find interesting. On the one hand, you have the whole "hints that PROTAGONIST was friends with Celestia, but now is angry at her for an unknown reason, it's later revealed that it was Discord and so the team up again to defeat yay" thing going on, but on the other hand you developed his abilities a little too much for the above to happen. I really don't know if this is going to suck or be epic.