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Joined October 2011
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Sequels

  • Cheer One More Time
    After the events of the first story, Cheerilee finds herself facing off against a new threat to Equestria. If only the villain would be more specific and tell her what she was supposed to do.

    4,799 words · 460 views · 32 likes · 1 dislikes

Stories (15)

  • Cheer On
    After a budget cut, Cheerilee is replaced by a younger and stricter teacher.

    31,667 words · 15,146 views · 338 likes · 12 dislikes
  • Sofa, So Good
    Rainbow Dash and Spike compete for a job at Quills and Sofas, in order to get a free sofa.
    9,299 words · 1,106 views · 57 likes · 1 dislikes
  • Twilight's Night After Santa Hooves
    Twilight is shocked to find that her friends believe in Santa, and sets out to prove he dosn't.
    11,731 words · 9,226 views · 64 likes · 3 dislikes
  • Cheer One More Time
    After the events of the first story, Cheerilee finds herself facing off against a new threat to Equestria. If only the villain would be more specific and tell her what she was supposed to do.
    4,799 words · 460 views · 32 likes · 1 dislikes
  • Party Fever
    6,483 words · 1,548 views · 31 likes · 1 dislikes
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    16,106 words · 3,003 views · 32 likes · 2 dislikes
  • Sleeping With the Ghosties
    8,768 words · 857 views · 30 likes · 2 dislikes
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    4,670 words · 397 views · 16 likes · 1 dislikes
  • The Secret Life of Pinkamena Pie
    12,117 words · 2,206 views · 25 likes · 3 dislikes
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    69,691 words · 982 views · 20 likes · 4 dislikes

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After a budget cut, Cheerilee is replaced by a younger and stricter teacher.  Cheerilee searches for a new job in Ponyville while her students deal with the new teacher.  However, everything is not what it seems.  Can Cheerilee use her vast knowledge to save her students and Ponyville?

First Published
29th Nov 2011
Last Modified
21st Jan 2012

Comments ( 351 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

This story sounds fun and promising. Very few grammar errors, but nevertheless a solid story. The lectures Cheerilee presented to the customers were absolutely hilarious.

#2 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

Lecture mod HAS no off switch!

Good so far, looking forward to more!

#3 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

Cheerilee should work at the library.

#4 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

i can't find the story:flutterrage::pinkiecrazy::ajbemused::twilightangry2: and just because i want to laugh:duck:

#5 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

now i am going to show each characters funny faces because i have nothing else to do with my life. applejack:applejackconfused:, applebloom:applecry:, that pony model pony thing:coolphoto:, derpy:derpytongue2:, fluttershy:flutterrage:, pinkie pie:pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiesick:, rainbowdash:rainbowkiss:, rarity:duck:, scootaloo:scootangel:, trixie:trixieshiftright:, twilight sparkle:twilightoops:, spike:moustache:

#6 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

Lol, Mud.

#7 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

One point. The head of a school is spelled principal, not principle. It's an easy confusion of homophones, as Cheerilee might say.

#8 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

keep up the good work really enjoying this one

#9 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

>>43701

:twilightsmile: Ah, thanks.  Noted and fixed.

#10 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

Bwahaha! :rainbowlaugh: I nearly died when the pegasister asked about reverse osmosis water! :rainbowlaugh:

#11 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

Nice work, Cheerilee's lectures were hilarious (And informative!) If you ask me her perfect job would be helping Twilight at the library- she's probably the only pony who knows even more facts than she does.

And I know very well the horrors of an overbearing, antagonistic teacher, I actually had nightmares about this one teacher I had in year four of my primary school. Its amazing how many people go into the teaching profession that don't:

1. Enjoy teaching.

2. Like working with children.

3. Have the ability to teach effectively.

#12 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

Nice idea of a stoyrline and a great job in making it almost like a real-world situation...as people do lose their jobs to big changs all the time. Still, it was a nice update and I do wonder how will the Crusaders and their Classmates fare over their new teacher. :unsuresweetie:

Also for Cheerliee I would have a montage of her trying various jobs and then fail each one of them, just for the comedic timing of it, before finding her true calling.

Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one.

#13 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

Looks like LECTURE isn't very effective....

Keep up the good work!:pinkiehappy:

#14 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

Love It:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::ajsmug::ajsmug::rainbowwild::rainbowwild::heart::heart::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::fluttershysad::fluttershysad:

#15 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

That restaurant scene was amazing!

#16 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

LECTURE TIME!:moustache:

We need more Cheerilee lectures. Very entertaining it's a very cute story.

#17 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

A very enjoyable story so far. I chuckled a little during some parts! Please make more! :twilightsmile:

#18 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

Cocoa is spelled cocoa, not coco. Other than that one set of errors, great start to the series!

#19 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

Loving it so far. Only one complaint:

I really don't think the principal would fire Cheerilee in front of her students.

Besides that, very good! Looking forward to more.

#20 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

The new teacher is an ass.

geddit?

#21 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

Spot on with all the characters. You really got the perception of Cheerilee's attitude. Nice touch with the Pro-Wrestling from Cheerilee; I think that Cheerilee is going to use that skill later on against Ms. Plum. (I really hope so! :rainbowlaugh: That would be so awesome!) Really great use of knowledge of water and other facts about the chemistry of water. I unexpectedly learned something more from this story!  I hope you keep doing well and I can't wait to see how the storyline will go. Ms. Plum seems quite strict, so I hope the children survive the first day and that Cheerilee doesn't waste time with facts on how the force of nails go into the wood. :twilightsmile: Keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

#22 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

>>44061

Thanks.  Another one I missed.  Actually I could have sworn I fixed that once before but whatever.  It's fixed now.

#23 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

I'm liking how this is going.  Cherilee's enthusiastic manner of imparting information...  good for classroom, could be BAD for everywhere else.

Plus, pro-wrestling?:rainbowderp:  Is that a random thing a reference to the '80's, or do you have a sinister connection?

#24 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 6d ago · · ·

I'd like to see CMC team up with Tiara and Spoon. CMC with their unstoppable enthusiasm, Tiara and Spoon with their wealth and connections - and Cheerilee will return in no time!

#25 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 5d ago · · ·

Wrestling? The 80's must have been interesting indeed.

#26 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 5d ago · · ·

that was a good read lol derpy and ms.plum doesnt seem that bad from what i see

#27 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 5d ago · · ·

A pony is like a cardboard box because of the many ways we may slice them open:pinkiecrazy:                Also, that new teacher is indeed an accurate depiction of most school teachers nowadays. I will be dissapointed if she fails to meet a humiliating predicament before the end of this fic.

#28 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 5d ago · · ·

>>44767

I have to say, for being the first one to try that riddle, I was not expecting a Cupcakes reference.  :fluttershyouch:

#29 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 5d ago · · ·

Very nice story, tracking this :pinkiecrazy:

#30 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 5d ago · · ·

Looks good:pinkiehappy:

#31 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 5d ago · · ·

>>44080 it could be posible

#32 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 5d ago · · ·

O MAI GOSH! :pinkiegasp: SEW AWESUM :rainbowkiss:

#33 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 5d ago · · ·

Ha! That restaurant scene is awesome! makes me laugh like an idiot.

#34 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 5d ago · · ·

>>44767 Sadly I've read all of the Cupcakes alternate endings and sequels and loughed WTB:pinkiecrazy: is wrong with me?????

#35 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 5d ago · · ·

I has the image of pinkie guttin rainbow forever burned in mag head....

#36 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 5d ago · · ·

Very interesting imma keep a eye on this story

#37 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 5d ago · · ·

>>45086

How did this circulate back to the topic of freaking Cupcakes!?:flutterrage:

And yet, in the end, even though I've never liked Cupcakes, I was introduced to the fandom becuase it exists, so I can't exactly hate on it either.:derpyderp1:

#38 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 5d ago · · ·

>>45279

It went back to cupcakes when somepony mentioned the riddle and answered it with cupcakes. This caused everypony who read that comment or your reply to it to remember cupcakes. I liked the gory story of cupcakes...

WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME

It's a good story, yes, but I'm just not interested in it.

-Adds "somepony" and "everypony" to computer's dictionary.-

#39 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 4d ago · · ·

This is now one of my fave fics.

*WARNING*WARNING*WALL OF TEXT AHEAD*WARING*WARNING

Despite this, I feel some parts of this story were rushed, which is odd because other parts feel very well thought through and researched. For instance, I feel the way the head fires Cheerilee is kinda abrupt, and not how I think it would be done- Firing her in front of her class? Nonononono. All wrong. Wrong.  More bitchy complaints about this scene is that it seems you're trying to force a point with many things- the style of the principal seems forced somehow. I'm not sure how. The restaurant scene is great- especially considering how I imagine Cheerilee- Just like this, except maybe not quite so... Impulsive? I find it kinda odd how she sees a coupla ponies fixing a roof and is like "I'll help" with (almost) no questions asked. You might not have read it, but the story "Romance Reports" is one of the fics that best writes Cheerillee's character- I would recommend reading it  reading it if you can work around the cloppyness :pinkiegasp:

I also like how well you've managed to portray the bad teacher. I've had a few, and this kind of attitude is exactly what I think of when I think "Bad Teacher". On a final note, I love the way the kids talk to each other- so true, and probably from experience, although I think the whole "mud" thing, while funny, isn't really the caliber of humor that I would expect from a filly. :scootangel::unsuresweetie::applecry::twistnerd:

#40 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 4d ago · · ·

The good news is that your story is funny and awesome so far. The bad news is that you spelled 'divisor' wrong the first time. The good news is that you fixed it for the rest of the times. The bad news is that derpy got hurt :( But the good news is she's okay. The bad news is that there's a lot of misspelled homonyms. But the good news is that YOU'RE THE FIRST AND ONLY PERSON IVE EVER MET TO ACTUALLY SAY "WITH *insert name of god* AS MY WITNESS" CORRECTLY!!!! everybody else is all like, 'as god as my witness' and im like

i love you

#41 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 4d ago · · ·

I'm getting addicted to Cheerilee fics. Maybe it has somethign to do with the fact that I want to be a teacher. :derpytongue2::twilightblush:

#42 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 4d ago · · ·

I'm getting addicted to Cheerilee fics. Maybe it has somethign to do with the fact that I want to be a teacher. :derpytongue2::twilightblush:>>45752

Oops, something

#43 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 4d ago · · ·

YES.:pinkiecrazy:

MOAR.:flutterrage:

that is, um, if you don't mind... and um, take your time... i wouldn't want to interrupt anything... :fluttershyouch:

#44 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 4d ago · · ·

looks like Cheerilee is getting popular... School Daze, and now this... yay for teachers!

#45 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 4d ago · · ·

Moar! I need it! :pinkiehappy:

#46 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 4d ago · · ·

Spikestache seal of approval. :moustache:

#47 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 3d ago · · ·

Is it wrong for me to be listening to "Another Brick In the Wall Part 2"? I think not :moustache:

#48 · Chapter 1 · 146w, 3d ago · · ·

>>47593

Meant to say while reading this, my bad.

#49 · Chapter 2 · 146w, 1d ago · · ·

OOH, Cheerilee got to have her own mental breakdown! Awesome!

#50 · Chapter 2 · 146w, 1d ago · · ·

I have an idea for a possible job for Cheerilee, why not become Princess Luna's teacher for a while ? :rainbowkiss:

I mean Princess Luna does need some help in getting reaquanited with the citizens of Pony-ville and all of Equestria and what better way to do that, than have a teacher who could assit you on your journey.:pinkiehappy:

Plus, think of the perks that Cheerilee could get if she does this job.:scootangel:

Still it was a nice update and a sad look at where the kids ponies are at now with the new Teacher. Man, is she a pain and not in a good way at alll. Doesn't this Miss Plum have any nice qualities in her ? :unsuresweetie:

Ha-ha  between the moments of Derpy and Cheerilee, plus Derpy is a busy pony with her own bad eyesight. That part with the "Science of muffins," had me rolliing out laughing.:derpytongue2:

It seems that there's a mystery going on with the school's budget or at least something wrong with it. As it seems that someone is scrapping money out of it.

Nice update to the storyline as Cheerilee is one educated pony, even on par with Twilight and her knowledge.

Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one. :twilightsmile:

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