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  • E Cheer One More Time

    After the events of the first story, Cheerilee finds herself facing off against a new threat to Equestria. If only the villain would be more specific and tell her what she was supposed to do.  · GWFan
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After a budget cut, Cheerilee is replaced by a younger and stricter teacher.  Cheerilee searches for a new job in Ponyville while her students deal with the new teacher.  However, everything is not what it seems.  Can Cheerilee use her vast knowledge to save her students and Ponyville?

First Published
29th Nov 2011
Last Modified
21st Jan 2012
#1 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

This story sounds fun and promising. Very few grammar errors, but nevertheless a solid story. The lectures Cheerilee presented to the customers were absolutely hilarious.

#2 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

Lecture mod HAS no off switch!

Good so far, looking forward to more!

#3 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

Cheerilee should work at the library.

#4 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

i can't find the story:flutterrage::pinkiecrazy::ajbemused::twilightangry2: and just because i want to laugh:duck:

#5 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

now i am going to show each characters funny faces because i have nothing else to do with my life. applejack:applejackconfused:, applebloom:applecry:, that pony model pony thing:coolphoto:, derpy:derpytongue2:, fluttershy:flutterrage:, pinkie pie:pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiesick:, rainbowdash:rainbowkiss:, rarity:duck:, scootaloo:scootangel:, trixie:trixieshiftright:, twilight sparkle:twilightoops:, spike:moustache:

#6 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

Lol, Mud.

#7 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

One point. The head of a school is spelled principal, not principle. It's an easy confusion of homophones, as Cheerilee might say.

#8 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

keep up the good work really enjoying this one

#9 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

>>43701

:twilightsmile: Ah, thanks.  Noted and fixed.

#10 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

Bwahaha! :rainbowlaugh: I nearly died when the pegasister asked about reverse osmosis water! :rainbowlaugh:

#11 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

Nice work, Cheerilee's lectures were hilarious (And informative!) If you ask me her perfect job would be helping Twilight at the library- she's probably the only pony who knows even more facts than she does.

And I know very well the horrors of an overbearing, antagonistic teacher, I actually had nightmares about this one teacher I had in year four of my primary school. Its amazing how many people go into the teaching profession that don't:

1. Enjoy teaching.

2. Like working with children.

3. Have the ability to teach effectively.

#12 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

Nice idea of a stoyrline and a great job in making it almost like a real-world situation...as people do lose their jobs to big changs all the time. Still, it was a nice update and I do wonder how will the Crusaders and their Classmates fare over their new teacher. :unsuresweetie:

Also for Cheerliee I would have a montage of her trying various jobs and then fail each one of them, just for the comedic timing of it, before finding her true calling.

Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one.

#13 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

Looks like LECTURE isn't very effective....

Keep up the good work!:pinkiehappy:

#14 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

Love It:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::ajsmug::ajsmug::rainbowwild::rainbowwild::heart::heart::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::fluttershysad::fluttershysad:

#15 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

That restaurant scene was amazing!

#16 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

LECTURE TIME!:moustache:

We need more Cheerilee lectures. Very entertaining it's a very cute story.

#17 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

A very enjoyable story so far. I chuckled a little during some parts! Please make more! :twilightsmile:

#18 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

Cocoa is spelled cocoa, not coco. Other than that one set of errors, great start to the series!

#19 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

Loving it so far. Only one complaint:

I really don't think the principal would fire Cheerilee in front of her students.

Besides that, very good! Looking forward to more.

#20 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

The new teacher is an ass.

geddit?

#21 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

Spot on with all the characters. You really got the perception of Cheerilee's attitude. Nice touch with the Pro-Wrestling from Cheerilee; I think that Cheerilee is going to use that skill later on against Ms. Plum. (I really hope so! :rainbowlaugh: That would be so awesome!) Really great use of knowledge of water and other facts about the chemistry of water. I unexpectedly learned something more from this story!  I hope you keep doing well and I can't wait to see how the storyline will go. Ms. Plum seems quite strict, so I hope the children survive the first day and that Cheerilee doesn't waste time with facts on how the force of nails go into the wood. :twilightsmile: Keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

#22 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

>>44061

Thanks.  Another one I missed.  Actually I could have sworn I fixed that once before but whatever.  It's fixed now.

#23 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

I'm liking how this is going.  Cherilee's enthusiastic manner of imparting information...  good for classroom, could be BAD for everywhere else.

Plus, pro-wrestling?:rainbowderp:  Is that a random thing a reference to the '80's, or do you have a sinister connection?

#24 · 159w, 3d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

I'd like to see CMC team up with Tiara and Spoon. CMC with their unstoppable enthusiasm, Tiara and Spoon with their wealth and connections - and Cheerilee will return in no time!

#25 · 159w, 2d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

Wrestling? The 80's must have been interesting indeed.

#26 · 159w, 2d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

that was a good read lol derpy and ms.plum doesnt seem that bad from what i see

#27 · 159w, 2d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

A pony is like a cardboard box because of the many ways we may slice them open:pinkiecrazy:                Also, that new teacher is indeed an accurate depiction of most school teachers nowadays. I will be dissapointed if she fails to meet a humiliating predicament before the end of this fic.

#28 · 159w, 2d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

>>44767

I have to say, for being the first one to try that riddle, I was not expecting a Cupcakes reference.  :fluttershyouch:

#29 · 159w, 2d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

Very nice story, tracking this :pinkiecrazy:

#32 · 159w, 2d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

O MAI GOSH! :pinkiegasp: SEW AWESUM :rainbowkiss:

#33 · 159w, 2d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

Ha! That restaurant scene is awesome! makes me laugh like an idiot.

#34 · 159w, 2d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

>>44767 Sadly I've read all of the Cupcakes alternate endings and sequels and loughed WTB:pinkiecrazy: is wrong with me?????

#35 · 159w, 2d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

I has the image of pinkie guttin rainbow forever burned in mag head....

#36 · 159w, 2d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

Very interesting imma keep a eye on this story

#37 · 159w, 2d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

>>45086

How did this circulate back to the topic of freaking Cupcakes!?:flutterrage:

And yet, in the end, even though I've never liked Cupcakes, I was introduced to the fandom becuase it exists, so I can't exactly hate on it either.:derpyderp1:

#38 · 159w, 2d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

>>45279

It went back to cupcakes when somepony mentioned the riddle and answered it with cupcakes. This caused everypony who read that comment or your reply to it to remember cupcakes. I liked the gory story of cupcakes...

WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME

It's a good story, yes, but I'm just not interested in it.

-Adds "somepony" and "everypony" to computer's dictionary.-

#39 · 159w, 1d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

This is now one of my fave fics.

*WARNING*WARNING*WALL OF TEXT AHEAD*WARING*WARNING

Despite this, I feel some parts of this story were rushed, which is odd because other parts feel very well thought through and researched. For instance, I feel the way the head fires Cheerilee is kinda abrupt, and not how I think it would be done- Firing her in front of her class? Nonononono. All wrong. Wrong.  More bitchy complaints about this scene is that it seems you're trying to force a point with many things- the style of the principal seems forced somehow. I'm not sure how. The restaurant scene is great- especially considering how I imagine Cheerilee- Just like this, except maybe not quite so... Impulsive? I find it kinda odd how she sees a coupla ponies fixing a roof and is like "I'll help" with (almost) no questions asked. You might not have read it, but the story "Romance Reports" is one of the fics that best writes Cheerillee's character- I would recommend reading it  reading it if you can work around the cloppyness :pinkiegasp:

I also like how well you've managed to portray the bad teacher. I've had a few, and this kind of attitude is exactly what I think of when I think "Bad Teacher". On a final note, I love the way the kids talk to each other- so true, and probably from experience, although I think the whole "mud" thing, while funny, isn't really the caliber of humor that I would expect from a filly. :scootangel::unsuresweetie::applecry::twistnerd:

#40 · 159w, 1d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

The good news is that your story is funny and awesome so far. The bad news is that you spelled 'divisor' wrong the first time. The good news is that you fixed it for the rest of the times. The bad news is that derpy got hurt :( But the good news is she's okay. The bad news is that there's a lot of misspelled homonyms. But the good news is that YOU'RE THE FIRST AND ONLY PERSON IVE EVER MET TO ACTUALLY SAY "WITH *insert name of god* AS MY WITNESS" CORRECTLY!!!! everybody else is all like, 'as god as my witness' and im like

i love you

#41 · 159w, 1d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

I'm getting addicted to Cheerilee fics. Maybe it has somethign to do with the fact that I want to be a teacher. :derpytongue2::twilightblush:

#42 · 159w, 1d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

I'm getting addicted to Cheerilee fics. Maybe it has somethign to do with the fact that I want to be a teacher. :derpytongue2::twilightblush:>>45752

Oops, something

#43 · 159w, 1d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

YES.:pinkiecrazy:

MOAR.:flutterrage:

that is, um, if you don't mind... and um, take your time... i wouldn't want to interrupt anything... :fluttershyouch:

#44 · 159w, 1d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

looks like Cheerilee is getting popular... School Daze, and now this... yay for teachers!

#45 · 159w, 1d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

Moar! I need it! :pinkiehappy:

#46 · 159w, 1d ago · · · Budget Cut ·

Spikestache seal of approval. :moustache:

Is it wrong for me to be listening to "Another Brick In the Wall Part 2"? I think not :moustache:

>>47593

Meant to say while reading this, my bad.

#49 · 158w, 5d ago · · · Job Hunt ·

OOH, Cheerilee got to have her own mental breakdown! Awesome!

#50 · 158w, 5d ago · · · Job Hunt ·

I have an idea for a possible job for Cheerilee, why not become Princess Luna's teacher for a while ? :rainbowkiss:

I mean Princess Luna does need some help in getting reaquanited with the citizens of Pony-ville and all of Equestria and what better way to do that, than have a teacher who could assit you on your journey.:pinkiehappy:

Plus, think of the perks that Cheerilee could get if she does this job.:scootangel:

Still it was a nice update and a sad look at where the kids ponies are at now with the new Teacher. Man, is she a pain and not in a good way at alll. Doesn't this Miss Plum have any nice qualities in her ? :unsuresweetie:

Ha-ha  between the moments of Derpy and Cheerilee, plus Derpy is a busy pony with her own bad eyesight. That part with the "Science of muffins," had me rolliing out laughing.:derpytongue2:

It seems that there's a mystery going on with the school's budget or at least something wrong with it. As it seems that someone is scrapping money out of it.

Nice update to the storyline as Cheerilee is one educated pony, even on par with Twilight and her knowledge.

Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one. :twilightsmile:

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