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GWFan


An old Brony who sometimes writes fanfiction though I have slowed down a bit in recent months. I mostly do Let's Plays on YouTube now.

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In the distant past, Discord created three creatures called the Drudges that terrorized ponykind until their eventual defeat by Princess Celestia. One thousand years later, the Drudges are rediscovered and recaptured, and it is up to Twilight and her friends to seal them away with the Elements of Harmony. However, things don’t go so well when the Drudges escape and cause havoc. Thus, Twilight and her remaining friends must go on an epic quest to defeat the Drudges once and for all. (Originally written for the first National Pony Writing Month.)

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 34 )

Yeah, this motely group of heroes....I can almost see that Equestria maybe doom.

Also the Great and Powerful George just like his daughter...snarky and a know-it-all.:trixieshiftright:

Great storyline so far and I wish you the best of luck as this storyline tale continues.:twilightsmile:

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It's actually already finished. 13 chapters long so only 6 chapters to go from here. I'm just releasing it slowly so I have time to give it another proof read just for the sake of doing so. National Pony Writing Month was last September and consisted of writing a 50,000 word story in 30 days. I managed 66,720 words at that time but it might be more now. So far, all we got to see of the entries have been the titles and word counts. I don't know if EqD plans to ever realease them since they got something like a milion and a half words total from that contest. I sure would like to read some of the other entries though. Hint hint, Eqd! :pinkiehappy:

you know, its not often i find someone like this but that george's attitude is all kinds of annoying/frustrating to me... dumb mule >.>

It truley is a eye opener hearing about Trixie having a father.

When it came to the characters being crystalized the only thing that came to mind was maybe they all completed thier focus.

of course with the Rarity's paranoia of looks can always cheer anyone up.

"Burgle" A name that best suits a thieving pony.

"Unwilling occultist." That sounds oddly familiar.

The part about Dicrod being the original ruler of Equestria is very creative.

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I didn't make that up. It's actually cannon. Haven't you seen the return of Harmony part 1?

Bergle being tricked like that, I can defiantly people manipulating me through that tactic!

Didn't expect the Druges to be originally Ponies, it sounds just like I Lord Of the Rings when Saruman says the orcs were once elves.

"Temple of Discord." That name actually would be a decent name of a place in Dissidia.

I really liked the powers of the Music Box, I thought it was very creative.

I LOVED the fight scene, mostly becuase that's something you most likley won't see in the actuall cartoon.

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The crazy thing is that I wrote this for the first National Pony Writing Month and wrote the whole thing in thirty days. I'm surprised it came together the way it ultimatly did. Since then, i havn't been able to come up wih anything that I could hash out like this, at least at such length. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

“Winter wrap up?” Pinkie said excitedly.

“No singing whatsoever!”

I love that! it's funny!

I enjoyed reading this!

Interesting. George is a jerk, but an amusing one. Nice to see Flutters taking up for Trixie and a nice moment between the Sisters.

“Ah, good. Expendables. We’ll need plenty of those,” George said enthusiastically.

I want to punch this horse in the face.

Exciting scene at the beginning. Loved seeing Twi snap at George. This should be a fun quest.

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Hope you enjoy! This whole story was written for the first of EqD's National Pony Writing Month events back in 2011 so I wrote up the whole thing in one month. I did do some post editing though. :derpytongue2:

Twi's exasperation is amusing. Nice to see Flutters and Rarity try to cheer her up. That ending is creepy.

Exciting, action-packed chapter. I enjoyed it.

Still loving Twi being the voice of reason to George's pomposity. Rarity scolding the drudge made me crack up.

Twilight cocked her head, not sure what Rarity was getting at. What was wrong with swimming?

Oh, Twiggles, never change.

Nice to see Twi and Flutters rally. The butt jokes are funnier than I'd like to admit. I'm worried about Rarity.

Poor Grey. That scene with the dragons was exciting.

Fascinating origin story. Loved the scene between Twi and Grey.

That scene with Fluttershy and Rip had me laughing. Rarity's spirit of self-sacrifice is touching.

I enjoyed that chase scene with the necklace.

Lovely way to end things.

Trixie did good? :rainbowlaugh:

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