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GWFan


An old Brony who sometimes writes fanfiction though I have slowed down a bit in recent months. I mostly do Let's Plays on YouTube now.

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Rainbow Dash and Spike compete for a job at Quills and Sofas, in order to get a free sofa. However, neither of them really knows much about the proper selling of sofas.

(Written prior to Season 2)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 22 )

This is hilarious, and it was strangely easy to imagine Rainbow Dash and Spike trying to sell me a sofa.

Oh god, I laughed so hard at Davenport's monologue my lip split! It'd hurt to read more but I can't resist!

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This story is absolutely ridiculous, and I LOVE it.

They said I was daft to open a quill and sofa shop in a swamp. Opening this shop was the happiest day of my life. Until it sank into the swamp. So, I built a second shop. THAT sank into the swamp. So, I built another one. That one fell over, burned down, then sank in the swamp. But the fourth one... The fourth one stayed up. That's why this is the best quill and sofa shop in Equestria.

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I love the way you carry the story, the comedy is great and everything is easy to visualize.
This is a great fic and just because I can't leave without pointing out some sort of flaw, you
Could be a bit more descriptive of the environment .
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

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I suppose I could have. That really is one of my general weaknesses when it comes to writing a story. They're almost always quite dialogue driven, but few readers ever complain about that so I'm not too bent on fixing this weakness of mine.

ok, this looks hilarious, will read :raritywink:

I remember this from EqD. An old favourite.

This was one of the finer comedies I've read. Very hilarious! I loved Davenport's characterization, he seemed like a more specialized version of Pinkie Pie. And I would love a sofa with an ejector seat!

Loved the opening about sofa technology, it made me think that maybe the sofas are remote controlled Lazy Boys.

I love the end about the jumping sofa, because thats definatly something only seen in a cartoon.

“That’s the way the sofa bounces,” Love that line!

Ah, the first MLP fanfic I ever read.
Easy to see how i was hooked.

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I'm flattered. I'm glad you still enjoy it. :twilightsmile:

it's stuff like this that make me think "glad i'm Canadian and don't have to worry about hospital fees and such"

seeing as this was written before season 2, what was your reaction to derpy/ditzy do's line?

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My reaction:
"They actually used her fan name? Huh, what do you know."
And that was kind of it. I know other people were totally freaking out about it, but I took it as a recognition and left it at that. A bit underwhelming, but there is little in the world that can surprise me anymore, even Derpy.

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GWFan, i also keep forgetting that you're like 9 years older than me

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I keep forgetting that thats a factor in how I view the world compared to others. :twilightoops:

Ah, friendship letters, how nostalgic.

They all owe Mr. Davenport an apology.

Unlike another story featuring Spike I've been reading, in which Mr. Davenport owes Spike and Twilight an apology.

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