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This story is a sequel to The Costume 2: Wild Ride


It's been six months since I met Derik, and I accepted an offer to move in with him. With that said, I was faced with a whole new world of feelings. Seems to be that my life has taken a crazy turn after putting on that costume, and I couldn't be happier.
[ NO STRIPPING IN THIS ONE ] THIS SERIES HAS BEEN DISCONTINUED

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I loved this part plz don't delete it

id love to see this series continued, neat concept and pulled off very nicely. sure, there's some minor errors here and there, but thats just a nitpick.

Please don't delete this story that would make me sad:applecry::fluttercry::raritycry:

Will they have foals. Please continue your story. It'sjust getting started.

Also I have a feeling that you have tried to find a way to make these costumes real right.

This section has some nice parts, but.. did we really need a blow by blow account of a COD match? It's pure filler, and not even amusing filler.

i love the name of this chapter

screw jeff dunham fluffy is the best there is

except for some grammar issues this is good you shouldn't delete it

But...but I like it...:raritydespair:

I don't want to see this series go. I really like it.

Dont erase the story i like it so far and it would be painful to see this erased :applecry::pinkiesad2::fluttercry::raritycry:

Yeah, definitely don't get rid of this. It's real good and I want to see where it goes.

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6542500 I'm not sure what I'm going to do tbh. I was thinking of having the next one be where they get married, then another one where they have foal(s). But with the immense bad luck I've been getting I'm not sure.

Seems pretty sweet till now, and fits quite well as a sequel for the Costume, now trilogy I suppose.
I would have read it sooner, if I knew it existed ^^

Maybe "thinking of deleting" shouldn't be in the title of the story, and rather the description?

Unless your title is literally "The Costume 3: A New Life [Thinking of deleting]"

Edit: I take it you took my or someone else's advice?

Thx for breaking it down into chapters.

[...] since his wife never told him she knew that he was going to do it, and the fact that she let him

Last capter you said Derik was scared his mother wouldn't accept him any longer as a son ;/
And I really like this story this far ^^ but it's kinda wierd that Rainbow is at the beginning always thinking about how she dislikes her new body and her fear of not being accepted by anyone and now she loves it and suddenly thinking about not being male as a minor downside of it.
But I want to the the next chapter nonetheless.

This was awesome.
Personally, I'd have given Derik either a Lightning Dust or Spitfire costume, so he could experience both worlds, like Cody/Dash, but it's still epic.

Also, nice move with the human costume part.

I want to fly... :fluttercry: so... so badly...

To be honest, I don't know what I'd be doing if I hadn't met him. I'd probably still be depressed, hiding myself in my room.

Me, I'd be sitting in my room playing vidoegames 24/7... when depressed, games are my answer. :pinkiecrazy: :ajsleepy:

A crab rangoon will have to suffice, so I took one of the four, and was about to place it on my tongue, when one of the bus boys came by. He stared at me from like six feet high, with short curled, blonde hair. I stared back, holding the rangoon inches from my open mouth. His eyes went wide, and he uttered something so quietly even I couldn't hear it. I set the rangoon down on the plate, and closed my mouth.
"Rainbow Dash..." He said, his hands shaking, making the dishes in his bucket begin to rattle slightly.
This moment was becoming very awkward, very fast, so to end it, I simply gave him a single 'hello and goodbye' wave of my hand. He began to walk away as Derik came back, although he only got a few steps before fainting. The dirty dishes spilled out of his bucket, smashing on impact with the floor as his body landed with a thud. Derik saw, then looked at me.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

"Where can I get one of those costumes!?"

I know, right? :rainbowlaugh::fluttercry::ajsleepy:

If I were in... whatever-the-main-character's-name-was-before-becoming-Rainbow-Dash's shoes, I'd see the whole part where Rarity was gonna get me to try on stuff (ahem dressed) and I'd be all like "Fuck that shit!" And nope my way out of there. Girl instincts or not, no one puts this one in a dress! :twilightangry2:

And no deletez da story! Good series you have goin' here! It'd be a shame if it were lost!

6543019 i know. if this one even gets to 100 upvotes i would be surprised. i dunno why this one isnt doing as good as the others

Onions are pretty cool.

Say, I was home alone, laying in my bed, which was all I did, I would pull it close to me if I felt like having a mental breakdown. I even wagged it and such. It sort of relieved my stress during that time.

My method of stress relief now, and would be in most instances, is nuking cities, watching things burn, slaughtering countless enemies, and showering in the blood of my enemies. :pinkiecrazy:

"I uh...would rather be doing other things..." Said Derik's dad.
"Harold!" His wife scolded. "Be polite!"
"How, when our son is dating a pony freak." I swear I heard him mumble under his breath.

Yargh, Captain! There be troubled-times ahead! The party-poopers have arrived!

Twilight gave me. me. Two 'me's', you may think it's a typo, but read it again. If you don't get it, she gave me a costume of myself, my human self to be exact. She said this one I would be able to change to and from pony to human form at will.

... say waaaaaa-???????:pinkiegasp:

I looked down at myself, glad to be doing this, with zero regret.

Well, you are retaining your original gender, after all...

"Sure thing, Applejack." Said Pinkie Pie. She smirked as she was now t-bagging Applejack's new dead body. "T-bag! T-bag! T-bag!"

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: That is SO me on like, every game ever! Though I would have been singing: "Dun! Dun! Dunanun dun! Dun! Dun! Dunanun dun! Dun! Dun! Dunanun dun! Dunana dunana dun!"

Only if you turn into a female pony, and have a guy shower you in endless love, despite the fact you're different from everybody else, only then will you understand

*goes through all of that*
No comprende. :trollestia:

"Rainbow Dash." He said as he reached into his pocket.
"Yeah?"
He pulled out a small silver box that read 'Zales'
"Will you marry me?"

:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

Great series you have going still! I'd like to see it continued!

6543142 THanks man :D what was your favorite part?

Say, I was home alone, laying in my bed, which was all I did, I would pull it close to me if I felt like having a mental breakdown. I even wagged it and such. It sort of relieved my stress during that time.

My stress relief you may ask?
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6543153 Uh... all of it? *bad poker face*

I like the story, and series, just overall, m'kay? I love reading this and would be thrilled to have more. Not like I got a story of my own to write... :rainbowderp: Oh yeah, that's right, I do! :facehoof::rainbowlaugh: Just kiddin', I know I do. But still, great to read this stuff when I don't feel like writing my own story (which is like, all the time, even though I want to keep going at it). Just keep it up, eh?

Assuming you're not, like, planning on stopping... which would suck... because massive cliff-hangar man... hate massive cliff-hangars... DON'T MAKE ME HANG!! :flutterrage: ... off a cliff's edge...

Oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh :3 *squeee* :pinkiehappy: this is so lovely!!! And cute!!! I hope you will keep writing this.

6542933 So does the rest of humanity. Get in line. Methinks I'm ahead of you. No cutsies.

*shoves you towards the back of the Iine*

6543098 You must be, because you made me cry...

...WITH LAUGHTER!

Oh shit son! Snap, snap!

How do I even snap? I have hooves! Well, Unique does, but...

I'm confused now...

6545582 Nah I think I'm in front of you but you can sit in my lap c; *makes you in to a small kid as I set you in meh lap*

Omg. there are reasons why I like your stories and our roleplays. its the fact that you are random and funny as hell XD

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