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Vinyl-ScratchDJ17


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You are just an ordinary, everyday person, a decent girlfriend, a decent family, decent grades, and friends, and you could say your life was...well...decent. That is, until by some sheer luck, your little sisters birthday wish comes true.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 120 )

"Awe, I wish you could stay like this forever!" Tara says, tightening her grip on me.

Huh, I fully expected them NOT to change back due to that other wish line. Still a good story though.

Become a dude every once and a wile for her:rainbowhuh:

Tara could wish for anything, and the family is low on money... Hmmmm...

6158106 omg thanks for pointing that out I'm gonna have to fix that

This was a really sweet story. I enjoyed it a lot. :pinkiesmile:

It's a really good story, just a few grammar errors and such.
Keep up the good work!

6160262 I saw most of those errors. it was hard typing on my small android which needs to be re calibrated. I press the a button it goes in as the uppercase button lol

My little brother's dangerously similar to Tara... the spoiled brat part. Though luckily for me, if I ever were in such a position as Logan, I don't have a girlfriend to worry about! :rainbowlaugh:Haahahahaheheheh. Heh. Heh... Heh... :pinkiesad2:

Great story, just some errors here and there that needz fixin'.

This was really cute if weird. :rainbowkiss:

Could have used a few more passes with a spell-checker slash an editor, though. Saw a lot of errors, and I usually don't notice those.

Still, wasn't a deal-breaker for me personally. Just a tip.

6160910 I know lol you are the fourth person I think to say that. I hate typing with an android.

6157838 Same Here Bro ;3 :twilightsmile: and awwww the cuteness....

omg see wart u did u made me do, i'm die of Dawwwwwwwwwwwww i hope your happy :scootangel:, anyways

Keep up the great work and have a great Derpy day.:derpytongue2:

6161030 MY FIRST FEATURED STORY IM SO HAPPY

a decent girlfriend

That confidence. :rainbowlaugh:

So yeah, I guess I should read the story now. Congrats on your first feature.

A couple typos here and there but overall it was a great read! The characters were relatable and it was well-written. I loved it!

WHY COULDNT I BE MARVELOUS CHESTER FOR A DAY???:raritycry:

6161046 Congrats Bro ;3:pinkiegasp: I really did Like! The story bro.

I dunno it would be a great story if tara's backstory didn't make me so annoyed I mean if my brother pulled all that *bleep*, got a huge cake for his birthday while I got a cupcake for mine then not only turned me into a pony before I was a brony (after becoming one is another story) but gender-bendering me I wouldn't be having cute little family bonding moments 'll tell you that much

6164288 lol what you said in the parentheses cracked me up!!:rainbowlaugh:

Interesting. So far I'm liking it, but use a spell checker. Good grief. I'll write more when I've read more.

eh...wasn't a fan of so much bad language...but not bad...I guess....meh. Cute tara.

6171768 could you do me a solid and hit the like button? I hate odd numbers especially the number nine :p

6171798 done, and I really liked the first chapter. It was cute and fun and really sweet!:twilightsmile:

His sister can warp reality and thry react like is nothing?

And then his girlfriend becomes Octavia.

6174770 that would be a cool twist to add. But i dont wanna ruin the flow of my story or add another chapter?

Hello Mister Vinyl... It's me... SkullKing... Rise and Shine... And good story bruh

6175035 omg where u been.bruh? WHERE THE F*** HAVE YOU BEEN?!?!?!

6175073 lets just say a lot of bad luck and stress has been happening but I'm trying my best to finally come back.

6175130 thanks I missed my friends on fim the most when I wasn't on for a while so I'm happy to be back!

No this doesn't suck but it does look a little incomplete though

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