The Writers' Group56,436 stories ·9,296 members
Transformations5,236 stories ·5,795 members
School for New Writers9,618 stories ·5,011 members
Bronies and Pegasisters Stand United! 614 stories ·214 members
Sunset Shimmer6,749 stories ·4,927 members
Soon after the defeat of the Dazzlings, Sunset Shimmer finds herself going through some changes she doesn't understand. With help from her friends, will she be able to fix her issue, or will she be stuck the way she is forever?
Thanks to mah proofreader: https://www.fimfiction.net/user/professorsawyer for all the help :D This story is dedicated to our great moderator: *drum roll* https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Eldorado
Page generated in 0.039 seconds
Total duration
981 users online
347,533 hits today, 2,167,270 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
This sounds pretty interesting.
Oh no. Poor Sunset.
6718713 :3
6718716
I didn't think you were working on this story. It's pretty good so far.
6718734 thanks :D
6719083 thanks man, i shall fix these when i get the chance
Senset?
6722496 XD I shall fix that
I like where this is going. I can already tell that this story has potential! Keep it up!
6722547 Yes, and I know already equines can consume meats. XD
Hmm... "flap my wings"? is this an alternate universe where Pinkie Pie a pegasus on the other side?
6722557 Its the pinkie promise
Yeah when Pinkie Pie starts making sense you dam well should listen.
Nice intro, good work.
6722596 thanks bud :D Can I has like? XD
6722550 i wasn't going to mention that. again.
6722865 Dont be upset i was just meesing with ya :D
6722564
Sorry, i just thought of this one.
6722904 :D
Poor Sunset.
Nice work so far, keep it up.
6723273 :D
My heart can't take these feels
But they could totally play off sunset as just being in a really good costume, especially since the rest of the humane 5 will most likely pony up during the concert anyway.
I feel like Principal Celestia NEEDS to be brought into the loop here in regards to whats going on with Sunset.
Okay two things.
1:Sunset was never banished, she self exiled.
2: I think Twilight would have still gone to Ponyville, Sunset is not the bearer for magic.
Still reading but had to point those out.
6725344 I know she self exiled :D
Obligatory musical reference go!
Damn twilight is such a tease, and freaking diamond tiara and silver spoon
,
Ohhhh if they weren't reformed (in the show) I would be way more freaking mad at them.
Spike eating the castle,
Whai did I no find dis sooner! Even tho I proof red it!
6725344
6725357
I tooooold you!
6719083
Damn. I guess these mistakes is what you get when the person proof reading your work is on MORPHINE AND OTHER PAIN MEDICATION!
HELP MEEEEEEE!
6718734
Heuheuheu.
6722557
Fun fact: The original idea for Pinkie Pie was a pegasus named Surprise. You probably already know this.
Maybe the "hope to fly" part is a reference to Surprise.
6725972 Spike eats gems and such. Crystal is a kind of gem. The gigantic tree holding up Twilight's castle is made of crystal therefore making it edible to Spike.
6725979 i dont no m8. your jus stoopidz. XD oh the humanity of bad grammar!
6726000 The pinkie promise goes like this:
"Cross my heart,
Hope to fly,
stick a cupcake in my ey- ouch!"
6726003
Dunt you bee sayin tat! I am teh besssst at poof readin!
6726008
Teh pain of promising.
6726011 Bish im fabulous! XD
6726001 yet we have never seen him chew on it or on the Crystal Palace.
6726016
Dunt lei 2 meh
6726017
Is that a part of chapter three? I must admit I haven't been able to proof read that yet.
Didn't stop this guy from posting it though XD
Nice. You took my title idea.
ACKNOWLEDGE MEEEEEEEE!
imeanwat
6726017 Read this.
6726026 :D
6726035
That paragraph, makes little sense.
Lemme proof read stuff first plz ;-;
6726037
You know you love it
6726046 it does. Your weak and feeble mind dont see it :D
6726058
"and came to the realization that parts of the castle were made of what he eats."
This literally means that the castle is made of Spike's, well, poop.
6726065 Okay i will make it easier to understand for you low iq :p
6726085
U wot m8