Twilight has been through a lot of things, near defeat from Nightmare Moon, almost losing her friends, almost losing her brother, almost failing, all those things. But can she deal with this new predicament? Can she battle a new enemy while....you know.
Interesting. Waiting for more content
6544679 Thank you.
so as I understand it when twilight retuned from canter-lot high she became a human
6545679 Yes it is.
nice
6545804 Thanks.
I like it!!!! Keep up the good work(ds).
6546045 Thank you.
How do I send it to a group?
6546329 Not real sure. Make a blog about it.
You know what intrigues me? The fact that it says that this chapter is 1000+ words, while also saying that the whole story is just over 300.
And I screenshotted it in case it changes.
Seems like an interesting premise. I'll put it on the back burner till it picks up again later.
6546694 Thank you.
6546694 I am currently working on Chapter 2.
? Centaur Twilight or Human Twilight..... Or are you dragging the reveal out?
6551284 Human Twilight.
So... are the parts redacted because you want to wait till season 5 ends and see if those particular events actually happens, or because you're not sure whether to add it to the story, or just because pure and simple canon mlp spoilers?
6568374 I added it to the story but if it does it's A) Coincidental or B) I'm Psychic.
6568374 I may remove it.
6544679 I came up with it over the week. I hope you keep reading it.
hey just a question when is next chapther
6668641 I am currently working on it, expect to be sometime next week.
6668690 that is cool take you're time unless you are goanna abandon this then we will get mad
6668693 What do you think of my story?
6668735 it is good i really like the idea of twilight walking around an no one stops her and asks about how she has been
6668841 I'll explain it in chapter 3. What about Human Twilight?
6676677 what about her
6676713 Do you like how I made her human?
6679612 yeah i just think it is sad she can't use magic or fly
6679615 I'll think of something.
6688208 cool
Nice, I look forward to seeing Starlight's reaction when she meets Human Twilight for the first time. Do you plan to have her visit Canterlot High in a future chapter?
6695086 Maybe.
For some reason I can actually imagine Starlight's human counterpart attending Crystal Prep.
Wait, so is she now a pony with one human arm? Or did it revert when she pulled it back through?
6695156 Reverted.
6695147 Same.
Well, you caught my attention. I've been waiting for a story like this. Instant Fav!
6706132 Thank you, Ironically I predicted Starlight reforming.
what gonna happen when starlight try to avdoid the mirror until she fell into the mirror?
6706399 You'll see.
Lyra and Bon Bon are gonna freak...
6706772 Probably Lyra.
Pinkie's open-mindedness never ceases to impress.
It doesn't make sense seeing these ponies freak over the sight of a hand. Do they not pay attention to Spikes appendages or what?
6707116 Spike's doesn't count it's claws and it was Starlight's experience. Plus Rainbow said in the movie "What are hands?"
6707132 How about Iron Will and Ahuizotl, then?
6707330 They still have claws.
6708069
SINCE WHEN DO MINOTAURS HAVE CLAWS!?