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Twilight one night found a crying pink blob, and she could swear it was a changeling...but changelings aren't pink blobs...so she takes the creature in.

Featured: 11/30/2015! (For like ten minutes XD)

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Twilight finds herself staring at a perfect replica of herself. It smiled.

It would be interesting to see if it kept the Ditto 'Dot eyes', as they usually do when transforming.

6665924 they dont usually keep the dotted eyes. that episode was about a woman's ditto who had problems transforming the eyes.

It was a nice read, but there wasn't much if anything in the way of a real conflict to tie the story together. Even slice of life fics have some sort of 'happening' that gives the story a reason to be there, you know?

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Yes it is a conflict, but it is not one that really ties the story together. It would be interesting to see if you go anywhere else with this premise. Are there any plans on trying to get Ditto home, or is this going to be his life now? If so, are there any ramifications of him staying in Equestria? What if he goes and unknowingly impersonates the wrong pony, causing a string of hi-jinks and problems to arise?

There's much more you can do with this universe, and stopping it here leaves the story feeling kinda flat.

6665969

Alright.

I see the potential, I just have yet to see it executed to its fullest. :twilightsmile:

6665976 i dont wanna mess the story up so maybe make a second chapter with said material?

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Either way. Whatever you prefer.

2nd person

Doesn't that mean the story is meant to be written a bit more like this?:

You strolled through the streets of Ponyville, on the way back to your majestic castle from your usual stroll through the town. The moon was shining bright in the cloudless midnight blue sky, and the smell of summer greeted your nostrils. You had planned to go home to have another sleepover with all of your friends at the castle, but little did you know, you'd soon be adding an unexpected guest to the list.

6666157 :P Don't worry. Before I began using fimfiction, I had no idea what "2nd person" point of view was, only 1st and 3rd...

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I'd say just either write a new story, or add onto this one

This reminds me a lot of Ponyville's New Pet, and I LOVE it. So much so that it hurts that this is only a one shot:fluttercry::raritycry::pinkiesad2:

That was weird, but kind of cute. I think I like the pinkgoopythingielings better than the blackbuggythingielings.

now you all know not to challenge me to a pillow fight

6667388 Well I'm gonna be making a second chapter :D
6667530 Not sure what those are XD
6667681 yes...never mess with Ditto!

DITTO VS FLUFFLE PUFF!

Who will win?:pinkiecrazy:

I can picture this as a meme:
FINDS PINK BLOB IN FOREST
THINKS ITS A CHANGELING

Comment posted by salmoncolor deleted Oct 29th, 2020
Comment posted by salmoncolor deleted Oct 29th, 2020

6673633 :D I saw what you did thrererererrrrerererer :D

And then it turns out to be Majin Buu!

Because MORE crossover! :pinkiecrazy:

I thought Pokémon could only say their names so why is Ditto suddenly copying Dashie word for word?

6674564 Ponies arent pokemon, so when ditto turned into dashie, it gave him the ability to speak

Comment posted by MaggotKing556 deleted Nov 27th, 2015

6674258 It was an odd little tale... but nopony died in gruesome fashion, so whatevers! :rainbowkiss:

6675511 dude...I've gotten 62 straight upvotes :D would thee like to contribute? XD

Nice story, but there's some things you may want to edit.

"Did you hear that spike?"

That should be, "Did you hear that, Spike?"

The others gasped and stared at the odd thing, never having seeing such a thiing in their life, and they’ve all seen many, many things.

That should be "thing".

Sadly, the Ditto's had been well raised, and on instinct they all transformed into other pokemon such as Charizard, Blastoise, and Venosaur.

And those should be "Pokémon" and "Venusaur"

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