Brony who loves writing stories and loves reading stories more.
A short chaptered story of two colts adventures by each other from the eyes of the older sibling. This was a story I wrote based on my life that I decided to share with all of you.
Please help me get better. I am an amateur writer/artist and would love to get some helpful critics and tips about how I can improve my writing or execution on this site.
Thank you. Grey Slate Out
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This is a really good and touching story and I found myself getting caught into it easily, which is really hard for me to do. My only complaint is that each chapter is really short.
7691549 >>Opium4TmassS Thank you. Sorry about the chapter length. This version is an adaptation of a story I wrote before. Thought it'd make more sense as chapters rather than one long story.
But thank you for the input. Critiques from such a great writer is very comforting.