Little Bother

by GreySlate

February 21, 2001

I never saw baby again, just a silver can with a name written on it. I told mommy the name on the can was a good name for baby.

I miss baby.

Author's Note:

Thank you guys for reading this little story. It holds a close place in my heart because of the memory it has behind it for me.

Really hope you enjoyed the story and got plot twist.

Comment below with any critics or tips or if you would like help understanding what I tried to convey.

Grey Slate Out, Peace.

Comments

[Opium4TmassS]

This is a really good and touching story and I found myself getting caught into it easily, which is really hard for me to do. My only complaint is that each chapter is really short.

[GreySlate]

7691549 >>Opium4TmassS Thank you. Sorry about the chapter length. This version is an adaptation of a story I wrote before. Thought it'd make more sense as chapters rather than one long story.

But thank you for the input. Critiques from such a great writer is very comforting.