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EquineAvenger
Read my fics. Comment on them, tell me if you like them or if I can improve something. If someone could make pages for them on tvtropes that would be great. Enjoy.
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6381980 Congratulations on being the first to comment on my work. What do you mean "first" exactly, if you don't mind me asking? If like my work please continue to say so. Thank you.
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It's just when some schmuck declares he got the first comment in. No other purpose for it.
6382128 Pardon me. I'm new to all of this.
Interesting. Pace is a bit fast, and you could probably flesh it out more, but still a decent read. Going on my list to keep track of.
6383666 Thanks for commenting. May I ask how would you like me to 'fresh it out more'? I allow constructive criticism.
Not bad, not bad at all. It is a bit rushed though. Better to take your time and add more details with the dialogue for one thing.
6384230 Okay, I'll see if I can add more to my work. I'll let you know what chapters I have updated.
what's Hatred?
6388575 Hatred is a new PC third-person shooter game that is 10 times worse than Grand Theft Auto. The player plays as a misanthropic psychopath who's goal is to kill as many people as possible before making sure he gets killed himself. It's so bad that it was rated A for Adults only. Not a game I would recommend playing. I thought of combining this with the Equestria Girls Holiday Special because when everyone wrongfully believed Sunset Shimmer was the secret-revealing blogger, Anon-a-Miss, all they felt for her was misplaced and utter hatred. I wanted to see how they would react if they saw how ugly someone consumed by their hatred really is.
6388615 I see, so they're dealing with a regular human
6388681 Yes, the main antagonist in this story is a human. That's probably what makes him so scary. So far, the ponies have never really faced a real human enemy in the show or comics. Humans may not be one of the most magical species but they are capable of some of the most evil and horrible things imaginable. Wouldn't you agree?
6388695 yep
For those of you who are rating my fanfic negatively, could you at least tell me why you think it deserves a thumbs down rating. Maybe throw out suggestions on how I can make it better for your liking. Please communicate with me. What good is it to rate a story negatively if you don't tell the author why you think that way. When I started on this, receiving comments from viewers was one of my top goals. So come on guys, let's communicate.
It's a pretty good story
When's the next chapter
6478093 I have a few tests this week and next week so I'm a little busy. But I assure you I will never give up on this story. I don't start things unless I intend to finish them. I've already started the next chapter and will get to it soon. So please be patient. And thanks for taking an interest in my story. What do you think about it so far?
Ok thanks
6478303 I already have the ending of the story planned out I just need to work up to it.
6478391 so how's that next chapter coming along
Pretty much this entire thing is like "Archie meets the Punisher"
This is fucking weird
I don't comment because I'm focused on the story itself! It's so short that I can keep on reading!
Moar
AWESOME!
Yes can't wait for the next
6600616 i hate it (nah just kidding)
6540393 no its fucking awsome
Man im gonna love sunset murderingg everyone yeah
6543964 hmmmmm
Hmmmmm *reads last part* burn you fuckers burn
6561387 yes so fucking awsom and brutal
Anyone else expect Not Important to come in at the same time?
i.imgur.com/KsPIFpv.jpg
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6601107 because its so fucking awsome
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For those of you who do not know what Hatred is, here's a trailer for the game.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qV3PhvCf_Jg
Warning: it's quite disturbing.
So they just don't mention the fact that a psychopath with a flamethrower tried to kill them earlier? I mean, points for not having Sunset just act like the whole Anon-A-Miss thing never happened but why would they not at least mention the near-death experience or warn her about the rampaging maniac?
Yay
6603078 I've just updated Chapter 13, hope you find better now.