6381980 Congratulations on being the first to comment on my work. What do you mean "first" exactly, if you don't mind me asking? If like my work please continue to say so. Thank you.
6388575 Hatred is a new PC third-person shooter game that is 10 times worse than Grand Theft Auto. The player plays as a misanthropic psychopath who's goal is to kill as many people as possible before making sure he gets killed himself. It's so bad that it was rated A for Adults only. Not a game I would recommend playing. I thought of combining this with the Equestria Girls Holiday Special because when everyone wrongfully believed Sunset Shimmer was the secret-revealing blogger, Anon-a-Miss, all they felt for her was misplaced and utter hatred. I wanted to see how they would react if they saw how ugly someone consumed by their hatred really is.
6388681 Yes, the main antagonist in this story is a human. That's probably what makes him so scary. So far, the ponies have never really faced a real human enemy in the show or comics. Humans may not be one of the most magical species but they are capable of some of the most evil and horrible things imaginable. Wouldn't you agree?
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6381980 Congratulations on being the first to comment on my work. What do you mean "first" exactly, if you don't mind me asking? If like my work please continue to say so. Thank you.
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It's just when some schmuck declares he got the first comment in. No other purpose for it.
6382128 Pardon me. I'm new to all of this.
Interesting. Pace is a bit fast, and you could probably flesh it out more, but still a decent read. Going on my list to keep track of.
6383666 Thanks for commenting. May I ask how would you like me to 'fresh it out more'? I allow constructive criticism.
Not bad, not bad at all. It is a bit rushed though. Better to take your time and add more details with the dialogue for one thing.
6384230 Okay, I'll see if I can add more to my work. I'll let you know what chapters I have updated.
what's Hatred?
6388575 Hatred is a new PC third-person shooter game that is 10 times worse than Grand Theft Auto. The player plays as a misanthropic psychopath who's goal is to kill as many people as possible before making sure he gets killed himself. It's so bad that it was rated A for Adults only. Not a game I would recommend playing. I thought of combining this with the Equestria Girls Holiday Special because when everyone wrongfully believed Sunset Shimmer was the secret-revealing blogger, Anon-a-Miss, all they felt for her was misplaced and utter hatred. I wanted to see how they would react if they saw how ugly someone consumed by their hatred really is.
6388615 I see, so they're dealing with a regular human
6388681 Yes, the main antagonist in this story is a human. That's probably what makes him so scary. So far, the ponies have never really faced a real human enemy in the show or comics. Humans may not be one of the most magical species but they are capable of some of the most evil and horrible things imaginable. Wouldn't you agree?
6388695 yep
Man im gonna love sunset murderingg everyone yeah