AppleJack and Pinkie Pie were taking a hot air balloon ride when they crash landed in a strange world and now they are trying to find there way home
i was born in january my eyes are brown just like on my avatar and im short for my age
AppleJack and Pinkie Pie were taking a hot air balloon ride when they crash landed in a strange world and now they are trying to find there way home
Well.
That was... Something.
Better than your last fic, but I recommend reading a few full length novels, a good few
weekshours at TVTropes and at least another million or so words of pony fics before you really set out to write another fic.Practice is important, but knowledge is too.
(And of course, age and wisdom, of which I suspect you have very little of the former.)
uhh thanks... i guess
Woah.
What on Earth?
Okay, extra points for the Skyrim reference.