Twilight's life was a simple one. She studied the magic of friendship along her friends and with Spike's help but, when she had to face Discord, something went wrong.
Now her life has moved back to a point before meeting her friends, Spike has disappeared and any attempt to mention him distorts everything around her, some strange foxes are appearing everywhere she goes to, she sees strange occurrences which, for some reason, everybody seems to ignore and she hears a strange voice that nobody else seems to notice.
What is going on? What happened to Spike? Who are these guys? Why her friends doesn't believe her? Who is this voice and why is so focused on telling her where to go? The only one way for her to find is by starting what will become the quest of her life.
Inspired on the many fics I've seen here based on Equestria being a video game but I'll add a twist, I'm also inspired by this little kickstarter
Why is the second chapter so much longer than the other chapters?
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It has more content to chew on and the other two chapters disrupts the flows, so they had to be separated.
Why it in both
Made by a Autistic/Author, but no Asperger/Autistic character
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Anything you want to put
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From what I understand, because it fits into both categories.
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No, it doesn't and can
Made by a Autistic/Author, but no Asperger/Autistic character
Anything you want to put
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Removed from "anything you want to put"
Interesting premise. I've got a similar story of my own going on exploring the social impact of a simulated reality experiencing an outage.
I shall track this story.
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I hope you like it.
Nice, binary text. Clever. And for all of us who don't know what to do with this wall of numbers, the translation is:
"Twilight run. This place is dangerous. Discord is- Where I am? Who are you? Who am I? I feel collapsing. Nothing makes sense. I must help Twilight. Where is Twilight? Who is Twilight? ERROR. REPROGRAMMING CODE."
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I'm glad for someone to finally pick up what the code said. You can make up from it what you want. And thank you for the compliment.
BTW, what is your opinion on the battle text?
How to make an epic. "Open with an explosion and build to a climax!" He, he, okay, a cliff hanger opening, good for the explosion, looking forward to seeing the rest. Your kick starter also seems interesting.
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Kick starter?
So Discord sent Twilight into a video game. This should be good. But now the question is whether Antonio is the game player (probably not but you never know...) or maybe the computer/xbox/thingy that's playing the game.
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Cool, thanks for the translation.
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Twilight's first battles. the game is moving right along...
Okay, the story is off to a good start. It certainly captures the interest (at least if you like computer games) and it is interesting to see the world from the POV of a character inside a game. Hmm, so despite what I thought two posted story chapters earlier, Antonio is sounding more like a brony playing a game now. Looking forward to seeing how this develops.
Can I please have some recommendations?
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Here is one and here is another one. There are those based on Sword Art Online but those aren't my source of inspiration.
Every enemy is glitched? Is the game a poor product or is Antonio actually the programmer running the game to get it bug free and working so it can go to market? Oh well.
Good luck with your Hiatus, I'll be looking forward to your next post.
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I have that planned out but the answer to the origin of these glitches may not appear in a while. With that said, I'll try to drop a few hints here and there regarding what is going on and hope to give an actual mystery, in example:
Have you noticed that glitches cause a headache (which leads to the debug mode) to Twilight but Trixie (even though she is no longer acting the way she should) isn't causing her one?
Granted, this is my first attempt at writing a mystery so my apologies if I fail at that.
I'm liking this.
When's thé next part
... That was quite bad.
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My apologies for that.
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Sorry.
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You changed your mind? What did you like for that?
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I did not. I'm just sorry about upsetting you, since you reacted politely.
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Oh, no problem, there was nothing else to say. I wanted to write this in a more loose way, compared to my other stories, and I gave more focus to my first chapter than the prologue (I actually wrote first the chapter before the prologue) and never went back to it. Reading as well the "battle logs" and how I jumped certain parts, yeah, it's badly written.
Early Alicorn Amulet Trixy
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IDK, I have so little time I can't even write at all. With that said, the story is still in my head, including the ending and the next chapter.
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Good to know I nailed that.