Land in the Sky

by goldentig3r

Welcome Home

Applejack and Pinkie Pie finally made it back to ponyville. The GPS that was installed in the balloon was really helpful. When they came back there was a sign saying to go to Sugar Cube Corner. Applejack and Pinkie Pie were curious on why there was a sign saying that they had to go to Sugar Cube Corner.

As they got to Sugar Cube Corner the lights were off. When Applejack turned on the lights they all heard a big "SURPRISE!" from all of there friends welcoming them back from there long adventure. Applejack and Pinkie Pie were never so happy to see there friends well maybe only Applejack. They really had a good time.

Comments

[The Orthodox Priesthood]

Well.

That was... Something.

Better than your last fic, but I recommend reading a few full length novels, a good few weeks hours at TVTropes and at least another million or so words of pony fics before you really set out to write another fic.

Practice is important, but knowledge is too.

(And of course, age and wisdom, of which I suspect you have very little of the former.)

[goldentig3r]

uhh thanks... i guess