The girls are at Canterlot Academy and are preparing for a big game against Cloudsdale high, but when someone goes missing they'll stop at nothing to get her back. They'll have to face their worst fears, and overcome their desire of greed, lies, gloom, hate, betrayal, and Black Magic. Will the girls survive? Or will they fall to evil? Who is spying on them? And what of the shadows the girls keep seeing?
Read to find out.
This is my first story, so please don't be harsh, I'm good with grammar but, not too good with punctuation. Constructive criticism is appreciated
Hope you enjoy!
Edited by: Prism Shine
Chapters (15)
*impatiently waits for the SoarinDash*
This looks like a good story. There's a few grammar hiccups, but other than that, you're good.
6280212 Thank you some Soarin dash will come in chapter 7 and a little bit on chapter 3
6281101
OMFG YESSS
THANK YOU
OuO
*Prepares self for awesome fanfic*
O-O who dafuq is that? SUSPENCE IS SUSPENCFUL
Also I wonder what Soarin's reaction is to Dash wearing a dress....
6298226 It's not who you think it is….there will be more clues, the biggest will be on chapter 7.……but, it will be all wrong…MUAHAHAHAHAHHAHA—*coughs*
6298216 Aww thanks <3
6299587 XD I too fail at evil laugher
You have to wonder how Disney does it
6299844 The voice actors must be that good, huh?
6300141 XD
Banana.
Now where the f are the other chapters?! 
~Dashie14~
6305166 Ah! I see you read the other note XD
Don't worry chapters on both places are gonna update today
6306867 Yay!
~Dashie14~
I think that you should put that in the aunthor notes of the first chapter because people with only reading tat will be inmature enough to give you a dislike, or simply let them find out by themselves by not saying anything
6310962 Ok thanks
DAWWWWWW
6319366 Thank you :)
Your story is very interesting. However, there are some grammatical and punctuational mistakes.
If you want, I could help you pre-read it.
6324747 Yeah, sure I would like that ^_^
OuO
6330590 ;P
MOARRRR SOARINDASH FLUFFINESS
6353207 you will get more in chapter 7 ;)
6353408 Yaaaaaay
Sorry I haven't sent you the next edited chapter yet. I was working on my own story ^^;
I'll try to edit Chapter 3 asap.
6356571 It's no problem ^_^ take your time ;)
Wow I really, really, REALLY love this story but I didn't get to say till now.
Keep up the good work!
6360136 Aww, Thanks soooo much!!!!!!
6360268 You're welcome!
More please!
6363191 Next chapter will be released tomorrow
Next chapter is getting out today? Amazing! Can't wait for it !!!!
6367359 Yup, I'm just making a few changes right now
OH MY GOD!
OVERFLOWING FLUFF!
*squealing intensifies*
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But really, I was screaming. I was flailing my legs everywhere! Thank you, oh my god.
6367601 Glad u liked it
Wait, I thought this is humanised!
That sentence with: Rarity opened the door with her magic. Are they some kind of girls with horns and wings? Anyways, chapter was great! 
6368086 Oh oops, I'll fix that. And kind of, when they fought their first battle with another villain, they transformed and met the sacred princess Celestia and Luna. I'm gonna explain everything when the villain is revealed
*Squeeeeeeeeeee*
It's sooooooooooo CUTE!!!!!
ALL ABOARD THE S.S SOARINDASH!!!!!
6368993 WOOOO SOARINDASH!
And a recommendation for you:
New speaker, new paragraph. It'll make the readers less confused. E.g. "Hey Fluttershy, could you please get some refreshments from outside? I wanna watch the Soarindash ship sail!!!!" Pinkie said appearing right next to Fluttershy. Pinkie had a tendency to appear out of nowhere, so she was used to her shenanigans. "Alright." She replied. |You can write this instead of that one: "Hey Fluttershy, could you please get some refreshments from outside? I wanna watch the Soarindash ship sail!!!!" Pinkie said appearing right next to Fluttershy. Pinkie had a tendency to appear out of nowhere, so she was used to her shenanigans. (And in the next paragraph,) "Alright." She replied.
6371768 Tomorrow evening new update
Also thanks for the suggestion, I'll fix it right now :)
6371822
AWESOME! 
And no prob.
welp
that was confuzzling
WHAT?!
ALL DE CONFUSION...
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6376637
Hehe, all will be revealed soon…
Or not…
A little short...... but good
6382036 I was gonna write more buutt, I got a bit out of schedule
im really confused now RIP
Sorry for not sending the next edit to you; I'm still working on it ^^;
6390043 Good
It's alright, I can wait ^_^
MOARRRR
