This story is a sequel to The Chronicles of Moonshade
A year and some change has past since the defeat of Nightmare Moon. Moonshade's past has caught up to her mentally along with the ostricisizing from the upper echelons of Equestrian society as she tries to show she has changed. At the same time the pressures of being related to the royal sisters and trying to steady her rocky friendships are taking a toll on her as well.
The judgment is in, what does the future hold for Moonshade as she goes through her struggles?
As always comments are welcome both good or bad
Chapters (6)
See, Blueblood, you just need to go out there and murder a few ponies, then everypony will be falling all over themselves to forgive you and treat you like true royalty.
6271172 thats not why Celestia said that, its cause who she is related to
6271199 That doesn't mean his shouldn't speak his weariness if a pony who did harm others or even killed them whether mind controlled or not were just suddenly sitting next to him. It be one thing if it was coming from no place or some type of envy but like with ponies accepting luna as a good pony after the nightmare moon scenario, anyone would be at first standoff-ish from a formerly evil pony. Also just like then till he sees her doing something he wouldn't expect someone dangerous to do then I can see him maybe easing up.
Few quick errors I noticed.
With and there's no 's' on continue in this case.
Again, no 's'.
Really, make the lieutenant she tortured into her personal guard. Odd, but I guess it could be an effective way to force them to make up. Just felt like I should poke that part. Anyways, nice chapter, though there's little info about what's happening.
6279189 It was planned to be a political move by Princess Celestia and Luna.
As for the info, it is the first chapter of the story, though some of what is going on should be obvious
Interesting so they where able to recognize that she had been under duress. Now how will she use this time I wonder?
I don't think poor Moonshade is going to be ready for the party that Pinkie is going to throw for her. Hopefully Twilight tipped of Pinkie so she doesn't go all out.
Not sure, but I think there should be a quotation mark there.
Needs capital.
Looks good, looking forward to the next one.
When I finished reading this I couldn't stop reading this song.
Missing a letter there, buddy.
Good chapter, it flows well. Few grammatical mistakes, like very few as far as I can tell asides from the above mentioned one. And a chapter that nicely shows Moon's insecurity. Looking forward to the next. Until next time,
-Sphinx
Poor Rarity she is doing her best I know but she should have allowed Moonshade to leave covered up. She is far to traumatized right now and standing out is the last thing she needs.
Great to see this story back! Well she is in the safest place she could be right now and Applejack will definitely be able to help out poor Moonshade as she deals with her issues.
Wow Moonie is as clueless as Twilight in that department. Let's see how this relationship goes.
Lol, I have no idea what you are talking about