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Kix


Hey all, I've been a fan of MLP for over a year now, my favorite characters are Applejack, Sunset Shimmer and Rainbow Dash

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This story is a sequel to Chance for a Better Life


*****Update*****
I'm adding the sex tag for just in case reasons. There might be a few scenes that include some near intimate moments but nothing close to warrant a mature rating.

After talking to Sunset, Applejack and Rarity, both Moonshade and Lily are struggling to even think of forgiving those that have hurt them. At the same time the girls have promised to see a psychiatrist and are being prepared to join the student body of CHS for the next semester.

With all of this going on bonds are being strengthened between the girls, their new guardians and new friends. Both Luna and Chrysalis are within inches of completing their goal of being able to adopt them, but Chrys also has one more plan kept secret.

As a warning there will be more time jumping in this story than in the previous ones, but it is for a good reason.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 41 )

Wow what a tragic backstory for Rainbow Dash! So I wonder what direction the kids are going to go?

Kix

7319178 we shall see what happens, won't we

Now that is a great cliff hanger!

Wow Moon figured that out fast.

Kix

7347069 lol, thanks. It sorta just came to mind one night. Right now it can go either way

7347078

The good part is that takes weeks from a test like that to come in so you can delay it as long as you like!

I have to say this. There is NO WAY she can forgive her former foster parents for the sexual abuse, nor should she.
The belittling and physical abuse is hard enough, but rape.....and the raping of a child or young adult by the family that took her in, is unforgiveable.

Even if she or they were able to, there oen thing to remember, Forgivness doesn't not equal stupity.
Don't expect them to change, Meaning they may do it again with another foster child and worst yet learn how not to get caught or let the child escape.

Kix

7432329 She isn't talking about forgiving them in this chapter, she is talking about forgiving Luna, if she happens to be her biological mother, for giving her up so easily.

As for forgiving her foster families, it may or may not happen. Just because you forgive someone, for anything, doesn't mean you have to forget. What it does mean, however, is to acknowledge that what happened hurt you, but you don't want to controlled by that hurt anymore.

7432339

That makes sense, I feel for Luna.
While she didn't make the best choice, she could done alot worst, saddly the foster family that did love her child died.
Then things went down hill for her
Hope Chrysi uses her connections to keep eye on these families who abused the two girls, as I said they would try to learn from thier mistakes and hide the abuse better for the next foster kid they get.

In real life a sex offender admited on camera people like him they don't change, they just learn to hid thier crimes better.

Kix

7432348 oh, don't worry, Chrys has been keeping a close eye on them. And even Posey has pulled a few strings. What has been happening behind the scenes, well, that may come out in the next two chapters.

Poor, poor Moonshade. Now hopefully with a mental health professional on her side they can get the official government agencies against her former foster families. Crysisy doesn't count because she is a spook.

Kix

7432863 I alredy have some ideas down and the next chapter started

Comment posted by Windy0 deleted Jul 28th, 2016

Here Rarity, let me give it a try, I know just the trick.” I step next to the fashionesta, still in her own pjs, with a silent giggle. With a wink I lightly crawl into Moon’s bed, causing it to sink a little under my weight and I settle in front of her, my lips close to her left ear as the crater I create causes her to shift even closer. If she wakes up now, I can’t imagine how badly she’ll freak out. “Daring Do needs your help, Moonshade. She is stuck in the Kitchen of Endless chores, forced to slave away for all of eternity.”

I think that is who you ment. Good to see that they are doing a major sweep but why do I feel that this will cause some major governmental upheaval that would not be fun?

I wounder when someone else will leave a comment. . . Besides me I mean.

Kix

7454781 no idea, whenever they feel like it, I guess

Chrys needs to show these fools just who they are messing with by publicly accusing the parents, cops, and the child services of participating in a child trafficking ring. That would be a firestorm that would buy them a bunch of time.

Plus, some of the others have gotten too impatient, I can’t keep them away any longer, especially since Pinkie wants to throw a final pool party followed by sleepover at my place.”

I thought Moonshade was living with Celestia, Sunset, and Luna right now. Pinkie that was nearly an obscene bikini you whore to the pool party. Now how will Moonshade deal with that revelation that Luna is her mother?

Kix

7496914 yea, Moon is living with Celestia and them, but doesn't really consider the place her home and Sunset knows it. Maybe I should have clarified it huh?

As for Pinkie's bikini, I thought it was fun looking and something I could see her wearing, not really thinking of the sexual design at the time.

As for the revelation, we shall see

7496940

I do occasionally have my mind go places that even surprise me. When I read that description it just went to the gutter. Still it was completely in character for Pinkie and you shouldn't be worried about it.

Yay! Also, does this mean the Circus of Fall is in the next chapter?

I hope that Moonshade and Lily's so called former parents can be delt with soon. I think that is the biggest hurdle to her moving forward. I am looking forward to the next chapter to see how the girls move forward.

Comment posted by Windy0 deleted Oct 9th, 2016

How is the next chapter progressing for you?

Kix

7971450 it's abou 95% done, just had alot of issues with it and how busy I have been lately hasn't helped matters

7976444

Sweet. Well I look forward to the next chapter then!

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:yay: Plus, I'M FIRST!

Trying to place who Celestia is dressed as. Cannot figure out who she is going to be. Also love how Sci-Twi's costume is referencing Starswirl the Bearded.

:facehoof: Why the heck didn't Chrysalis or another adult not ghost the kids? Let's see how this goes and hopefully Mr. Buck gets a warm welcome in prison.

Kix

8088958 It may or may not be revealed in the next chapter

Well that is a cliffhanger to end this story on. Let's see how this all goes down in a possible sequel.

“Sunset, go get us a seat, please, and take both Lily and Sunset with you.

sunset should take lily and herself?

Kix

8255925
Thanks for catching that, I have not had an editor in a long while

only he is supporting my full weight on my shoulders as he holds ...

What?

7986434
I think Celestia is dressed as a stormtrooper

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