This is Comet, Comet Trail. A grey pegasus-- Unicorn... Err, Alicorn? He's new in ponyville, and seems to hit thing off pretty well, well, as good as any socially awkward stallion can in a town that the spirit of chaos wanted to make into the chaos capital. He's rather cryptic and avoids talking about himself, but it's all okay since Twilight seems to trust him. Right? Why shouldn't you trust a cryptic and secretive Alicorn what just disappears in a blink of an eye and has a shadowy aura around him?
Anyway, this takes place after episode 13 season 5
On hiatus, until I know where I want to take things, or if I'll begin from scratch.
Thanks to:
*Zoetic-Zebra, for amazing cover-art.
Chapters (12)
More please
6365013 Why, of corse! We'll do our best to update more often, but school will be a problem, but rest assured that We have already plans for the next chapter!
Great chapter. I wonder why Comet uses "Thou"... I guess we will find out later.
Can't wait to see more!
Lol. Comet just got SHIPPED!
6370974 Thou bet!
Also We're thinking of making an parallel story to this one, whats thine thoughts of that? It will share the same Universe and roughly the same time but will feature somepony else.
Hi. I notice you're new. Welcome to FIMfiction.net. It's nice to have you with us and I hope your stories do well here and you make lots of friends.
6397704 Why thank thou!
Also, on a different matter, be sure to check my page for different updates on things. There might be ideas for new projects, news, discussions(?) and bonus things like things thou might have missed in the story and more!
If thou find any errors, grammatical or spelling wise, be sure to point them out, and as I've just found out by experience, it's hard to find thy own errors. Telling me what I do right/wrong helps me make this story more awesome, maybe as much as 20% cooler.
6397804
First, you're welcome, it's my pleasure.
Yes, I'll do that when I see you posting updates for your stories, projects and what not.
Ah, yes! The great bane of the writer: our inability to see the many and varied errors we may unwittingly put in our stories. I'm laughing because you wouldn't believe how often I do that and my being dyslexic doesn't help, either!
Fortunately I learned to touch-type many years ago. Fortunately my fingers are not dyslexic so that helps a lot!
If I should see errors in your work I'll be happy to point them out to you but I'll do that in PM rather than clutter your reply boxes with such things.
Finally, it's nice to meet you!
I'm enjoining this story and can't wait for the next chapter!
I've enjoyed the story so far. Started laughing at what you had Rarity do. There is one thing though, when it says "She fought that I don't have the guts to do it" did you mean to say *thought* or is the word *fought* intentional as meaning argued? Either way look forward to the story.
6506593 Well, it's fixed now, thanks for pointing it out.
Also if thou enjoyed Rarity, maybe next chapter will be as good, or maybe (and hopefully) better...
Good title :)
6564436 Thanks!
I hope that thou liked this writing style I used for chapter 8 and 8.5. I'm also planing on making another story about the sister of the character from said chapters. What are thy opinions on that?
6565216 Sounds interesting
6565771 Well it's up! It follows his sister AND Luna
. Check out A Very Gray Trail where Moon and Luna are going to have quite the ride, at Luna's cost of corse. 
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Not bad😃 I like it! It's just a little bit rushed and uhh... missing a few details.
Too little info and a little bit rushed..... I'll stop talking now.... 😐