Quick Wits always wanted to join the royal guard ever since the first time he went on a trip to the royal training grounds back when he was just a young colt still in school. Unlike most, he wants to join the Night Guard.
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Finish only has one "n" just to let you edit that.
Looking forward to the story. Like the concept.
Interesting start. There are a few minor errors in spelling and word choice, but other than that it's off to a decent start. Question: I saw the romance tag, so is this OC going to be shipped with somepony? My initial guess was Luna herself, but given that Wit's trainer is apparently going to be Moon Blossom, I'm beginning to second-guess myself. Also, is this going to be an adventure fic? It could be.
Anyways, as I said, this has a nice start. I'll be keeping an eye out for this in the future.
~EpicTales
7560847 7560851 Thanks! I'll go through it as soon as I can, though I probably just didn't hit save since I know I fixed that 'finnished' thing, but thanks for pointing that out. As for adding the adventure tag, we'll see about it, but for now I don't think so. Maybe in a sequel? Who knows. Again, glad you enjoyed it.
Wow, good start! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Nicely done dude, an itneresting read~
However, I kinda expected the thestral to be surprised that a regular pony wanted to join the night guard, maybe even shocked.
She just took it in stride... eh.
Whatever, nice job, Ima follow.
7561727 Who knows how the other are going to react. I merely have a guess.
That statement may or may not be false, who knows? Probably me. But more seriously, I'm glad that as many are enjoying this story, it was mostly to get myself to get back into writing again, about 3 months ago that is. That doesn't mean this story I less important to me, just that I will probably update it iregularly. (Not that I don't do that normally, but that's beyond the point) But if things continue like this, it might get a higher priority. 
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Well I'm glad you wrote it dude, looks pretty swell, I like a good guard story.
And I know that irregular update schedule business, I have it all the time.
Anyway, keep up the fantastic work!
Sounds interesting. I shall be following this story.
Lets see how the
tormentingtraining will proceed7563757 Unicorns have the worst stamina among the different pony races. Thestrals have the best after earth ponies. Quick Wits is a unicorn. I don't believe I need to continue this. The statement, that is.
You just got a like, fav, and follower, good job on the fic.
The first letter of names of days, like Monday, are capitalized, not lower case.
7571255 Ah, right. Where I'm from it's lower case which results in me sometimes doing that. Thanks for mentioning it.
Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm interested in this story
So, is the fix dead?
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No, but I'm having a hard time finding time to do stuff. I've had one test per day just this week, and an job interview just today. I have written a little bit on the next chapter, but it's hard getting back to it.
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Writing a story is like banging a friend. The more time since the last one, the less likely that it will happen again.
This story hasn't been banged since 2016. The chances of those two getting back together even for a quickie is quite slim.
The Monk
“On her doorstep was Twilight Sparkle. While Derpy deeply respected the mare, like most in Ponyville, they wished she'd either switch to decaf, or start hitting the harder stuff.” -Dan_s Comments
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That's... actually a decent analogy.
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Technically, I've worked on it since then... though since I have a hard time staying motivated and have the time, there hasn't been much progress. That, and I have a hard time remembering where I planned to take the stories. I have like 10 different things I have written partially, though I've been meaning to get back to it.
I've actually made revisions to every story I've released, going through them correcting grammar and spelling mistakes.