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Brilliant plots, total dick.

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A prompt to see if you'd enjoy this sort of story.

Recreating spells that are long forgotten is risky, really risky, but Twilight's finally mastered the spell. Excited about her accomplishment, she goes to demonstrate to her friends of said spell. However, she makes an error when Pinkie Pie won't sit still enough and accidentally causes Twilight to make an error.
And now there's a wolf-pony-like-thing, who seems dead set on smoking.


It's one thing to be interrupted when solving a murder case, it's a completely new level of annoyance when you're sucked completely out of your world, but it's a real big problem on your hands when you're right back where you started before Fabletown.
An animal.

And All Bigby wants to do is go back to Fabletown, but until Twilight can revert her spell, Bigby's gotta bite the silver bullet on this one.

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Comments ( 23 )

I like it!

Can't wait for the hiatus to end.

Just started today and I already like the idea! Don't know what it is but it looks cool, also is this Fabletown from another book series or something like that?

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Right, thanks for pointing this out.

I shall make the corrections shortly

Bigby being clam with being a pony is intentional, He lives in a town with Fables. Hell, he's a Fable! :rainbowlaugh:.

Maybe I should change the pony's reaction to his swearing.

It's on hiatus, because I didn't want to dwell too fair into the story without seeing how it's enjoyed first.

I might even rewrite the entire first chapter tomorrow.

Hoh, SPIT! BIGBY!? :D

Well, not awful. Not award-winning, either, mind you, but not awful.

I like this, I just hope you don't turn bigby into some meme and reference spouting machine. Though if he were to do something like that he would probably reference some fairy tale thing. I don't mean to be rude by stating this, it's just that I noticed the fairies joke and the hotline miami reference, and while they appear funny, they're also out of character for a chain smoking werewolf detective from fabletown. I suppose if it's little things here and there, no problem, but I've seen plenty of stories with great ideas turn into meme spouting gang bangs that make the idea lose all of its novelty and charm. I'm probably just nitpicking, sorry. Continue with making more as you like please, as you are the writer in the end, and I would love to see this continued, as I'm sure many others would too.

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Possible spoilers for later comics in the fables series
bigby only thinks it's the knife that lets him transform for a long time.
It's actually because of his father being the nort wind that lets him shape shift.
As evidence he was at one point turned to glass and to prevent him from transforming himself he was shattered.
However this is extremly late in the fables canon so the knife would work better probably

Also bigby"claims" to only smokes to deaden his senses to living in a city

Can't wait to see rainbow blown away by a giant huff and puff

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Thank you for the criticism.
I wanted to have Bigby aware of pop culture, but not to overdo it. I'm also going down an assholish sort of personality for the detective, as used in the Tale Tell game. While out of place, yes, I was hoping sarcasm would keep the readers from getting bored with the gritty pace I intentionally went for.

If I do make references, it's just so you don't get bored during times where Action isn't the primary thing. Of course, meme sprouting belongs in other stories and not like the one I have in mind, but keeping the attention on detail only will deter away from dialect and character development so a limited use of these sort of references might be pushing Bigby's character (but not enough to completely change him)

Thank you for the criticism and praise, it's much appreciated!

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Award winning, no.

I'm glad you don't entirely hate the story, I expected it to get really poor results.

It'd be for the best if you included in the description just what your story is a crossover with.

more,MORE,MOAR!

Good chapters can you do more chapters

I really want another chapter this one was awsome

Well..... Looks like I found another great story that is dead

7698367 Unfortunately so, it was so good.

Looks like I found another piece of shit.
:pinkiesmile:

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Also im being sarcastic. Its not bad.

I've played the wolf among us well not all the way through but I liked what happened in this story and from what I've seen in the game you have captured Bigby beautifully I hope you remove the hiatus tag and continue the story because so far great set up

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