The following is a fanfiction of a fanfiction, a spin-off, a parody, please support the official release.
I was inspired to do this and I would hate to be red-bombed because I'm just a nerd who writes mediocre fics
okay I'm stopping now
Rule 63--T.U.L.L.O.D.S Universe
it means that everyone who was a girl in T.U.L.L.O.D.S is now a boy and vice versa
Dusk Shine was born a mare, actually, just a very selective mare that doesn't go out and completely expresses herself like a normal pony would.
This unofficial spin-off follows the brilliantly smart-mouthed Twilight Sparkle: an antisocial, awkward, unromantic bookworm who wants nothing more but to keep to herself and read.
However, that dream is pretty much like every character you're going to enjoy in this story because it was killed off when Twilight Sparkle is forced to leave her home in Canterlot and live in a smaller town named Ponyville to watch over the Summer Sun Celebration and to make friends.
How exactly is Twilight Sparkle supposed to make friends when everyone in Ponyville developes a crush on her?
ehhhhh I think I've seen the "everyone acts like an ass for no reason other than comedy" trope too many times in this specific way for it to be funny anymore. At least the original "unexpected love life of dusk shine" tried to be somewhat faithful to the show before going off the rails.
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Everyone acts like ass?
Of course, assuming that I made Twilight come off as an asshole is one thing, and I didn't try to make that so, but it's but not exactly everyone. Solaris made a mistake and Twilight has to literally pay for it (I wouldn't be happy either).
And bitches love sass.
I remember making one character that's an asshole, just one, and that's Rainbow Blitz.
As for faithfulness to the show, I'll watch for that in the future. We've all seen the intro to the show, they take a chariot to ponyville, Twlight slams her door in Spike's face. Intensive research. I didn't think it'd be reshreshing to read about it all over again, you can get that from Friendship is Boring or Unexpected Lovelife of Dusk Shine, my story isn't meant to be held up to the original standard - as spinoffs usually are - and judged how great of a work I did copy and pasting what Vengeful Spirit does.
You might not have noticed, but there's multiple references in the story - especially in every scene.
(If you think I'm not going to rock the boat, Pinkie's going to destroy the boat)
6456634 Alright I see your points. My biggest complaint is really Barb. It really pisses me off that she doesn't have the slightest bit of respect for Twilight who is (or should be, unless she isn't in this alternate universe) the most prominent reason she is even alive to star in this story.
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Twilight just doesn't discipline Barb, Barb's is Twilight's only friend at this point.
6456673 Alright I guess. You wrote it, and it's probably a hell of a lot better than anything I've written recently.
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I'm surprised that this gotten any likes, to be honest
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I'm gonna keep reading but honestly if you want to go crazy nuts improve the pacing it doesn't really fit this kind of comedy i do encourage going full on jump the shark while high fiving it with fireworksgoimg off in the background crazy 
6456699 I'm still kinda mixed on the 1st chapter okay but chapter 2 seems really rushed and Really blitz seems the only really funny one and there's a bit of a lot of jumping the shark you go from Knight basically molesting twilight on his pimp throne to butterscotch casting magic in all of two sentences
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I had a lot of work to put in on other matters (schooling) so it made concentration hard.
I'll rewrite the chapter when I have spare time so the pacing is a lot more smooth than flexed out.
Alright, here is a quick critic: It is way too much dialouge and nearly no descriptions. Try fleshing out the story by describing what the characters are doing/thinking and what is happening in the background while the dialouge is taking place.
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thamks, I keep that in mind.
Oh god, this is so over the top bad, it made a full 360 on the skale and is actually so funny I laughed my ass half off. It's the perfect parody.
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That was just a warmup, get rid of introductions and fodder like that.
Time for the main course
Wow, I think I just died from either laughing my head off or caving in said head by facedesking so hard. Good thing I always have a phoenix feather on hand. Now where was I? Oh right, the chapter. So. Many. Goddamn. Puns and references. And the personalities... Why am I still reading this?!?
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I fucked up this chapter due to distractions, I'm drafting it up again to be less cringe-worthy but still cringeful.
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Link to the Cute Twilight Picture used in the story. Please support the artist.
Hotta say I'm not 100% on twilight using curse words that I've only heard my Irish grandmother say but I'm so starved for rule63 that I'll read almost anything at this point. Keep up the good work.
What is the T.U.L.L.O.D.S Universe?
Why didn't she teleport inside her house? She has magic, why didn't she use it?
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Plothole reasons
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The Unexpected Love Life of Dusk Shine
I'm loving this already Favorited and liked ( R63 best rule)
just to let you know the R63 for Angel is Lilith also love the DBZ team 4 star references
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Thanks, mate!
I am soooo disappointed there was no JOHN CENA. Also Solaris x twilight (potentially) ? ... head cannon accepted
How has this not been posted yet?
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heh, I couldn't make it work this time.
But
the attitudes will be adjusted
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not many bronies know dbz abridged
Was it supposed to be wrath?
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have you ever played Shadow of Mordor?
Don't you hate waking up to being drugged by some random people? No okay than just me . . .
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Because that would be boring. To some extent, all of life's problems can be solved by teleporting.
The line at a store too long? Teleport to the front.
Getting mugged? Teleport a wad of dirt into the muggers heart.
Locked door? Teleport inside.
Have a tumor? Teleport it out.
Too much junk mail? Teleport it into a fire.
Don't feel like walking? Just teleport.
Annoying door-to-door salesman? Teleport them to the other side of town.
The list goes on. I'll admit the tumor would be tricky though...
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uploading chapters by mistake? Teleport the hell outta here.
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I know i do, then again, I should stop sleeping under same roof as Bill Cospy
6527010 Yeah, but if it's raining, isn't it better to teleport inside to get away from it? And besides, if it works, why not keep on doing it?
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teleporting with objects are not accurate, teleporting takes a lit of magic, and remember that I'm keeping with EARLY Twilight- the one thqy doesn't have a character development in one episode and a half.
Blitz was being a dick. Why is Twilight even apologizing to him? How annoying......
I declare, this story shows great promise.
great story, I want to knew what happen to twilight ear, also please update
6504611 yess I have, my oc see the world as if wraith world is active at all time........
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Because she was about to ask a favor.
That's it. British Twilight=Best Twilight
I will say this because I have to. Pointing the trope kills any and all allure that trope holds. Talking to the reader often kills the mood, especially when done with extreme frequency.
Then again, you don’t have to worry about me and my words. They don’t apply here anyway. You have no allure. No flow. Your story doesn’t even build a mood. The first chapter was nice though, and funny.
what about the other mane 6??