The gang is invited to Manhattan by Trixie, during the show Trixie hypnotizes flutter shy! And asks a series of questions that caused flutter shy to imitate several of her friends, and the imitation makes them miserable! As the main six exactly what flutter shy things of, and no pony unscathed well except for one! But that's only because she has no logic!
I'm going to assume English is not your first language. And that you're 10. And haven't learned how to write creatively in ANY language. That's the only possible explanation for this.
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Either that or we're in the presence of a major class trollfic.
6214223 Going by the rest of this guy's published stories, I think he just really has no idea what he's doing.
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Oh, come one, how bad it can be?
*gives them a look*
Oh God, it's even worse!
6214483 Minor suggestion, this is a comments page. Not a chat room! Also I don't care how fast the reader you are six minutes does not give you the ability to read, all my stories. Not even Barry can do that.
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First of all, yes, Barry can totally do that.
Secondly, I always do my research and to prove it, here's a quick compilation of what your stories could use to improve;
I liked it.
I honestly thought it was a toss up between Twilight and Rarityfor stubbornness but Twi is definitely the most insane.
Also, math whiz Rainbow Dash. I can dig it.