This is a story that follows right after the season one premier! Now in order not to spoil the story but at the same time tell you exactly what's happening, starlight is going to to give a report, to the Masters that she serves! If this is not clear to you, that this story is by the way in mostly first-person! Please pick up your order form for the nearest cobra base, and fill out the resume! Because I think a beautiful town in Springfield is just right up your alley! (If you don't get that last part of the reference go read a book! A G.I. Joe comic book to be exact)
Chapters (1)
... do you even remotely understand the concept of proper nouns? Or grammar in general?
Question for all the readers: Who actually read the whole thing? If you did, seek help, as you are either determined to an unhealthy extent or insane.
6135102 *Reads through. Falls to floor. Twitches*
Due to your terrible English, I find myself scratching my head over the story.
Remove the word in bold and make the underlined phrase a new sentence.
Starlight apparently "never got used to walking on these feet" so does that mean that she's been to the human world before?
> Snakes don't have legs.
> The picture is unnecessary.
*an
*of
> Remove the first bolded comma completely. Change the second, third, and fourth bolded comma into a period.
> Put a comma after the underlined "yes" and put "a" before the underlined "variant" delete the underlined "may"
> What exactly is a "quick lie"?
> What exactly is a "quick lie"?
> Allow me to rewrite the first underlined phrase: He is using this as an opportunity for my escape.
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That's all I can do. I already lost enough brain cells going through Act One.
You've been here since 2012, and you still don't understand the standards of this site? What a shame.