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Eggtaro


If you're reading this, I'm going on hiatus indefinitely. I will return one day, but until then, please take care and adieu.

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Celery Stork, is your average high school student in CHS. With the arrival of the new semester, he made it his goal to find a school club to join.

School clubs are very important for a student of CHS. It helps the students to make new friends, to unearth hidden potentials within them, to discover new hobbies and entertainment and much, much more.

But it isn't as easy as our protagonist expected. He soon finds himself joining an unlikely and unusual school club. How will this club affect his school life? How will this club affect him?


This is set in the Equestria Girls universe. So, yeah. Humans instead of ponies. Enjoy.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 32 )

I am excited what this will become.
Sooooooooooo... you surprised me.
I thought the Host-Club was the inspiration for it, I'm not sure if that is the name of the anime, but who cares? :derpytongue2:
Mlem. Translation: This club could evolve into a superior club anyways. :pinkiecrazy: I'd join it!

Poor Aria. I want to give her a hug right now! :fluttershysad:

So who is gonna be the gumball of this story and by gumball I mean "The guy that gets rejected by the reject club. :rainbowwild:

5578771 I have no one in mind just yet! :pinkiehappy:

You have caught my attention. Go ahead and fly like a buttered fly.

This story intrigues me! :pinkiehappy:

5579680 i shall soar like there is no tomorrow!:rainbowdetermined2:

5579751 i aim to please! :twilightsheepish:

You are one of my favorite authors so I expect fantastic stuff, like this amazing story

You fail at not making me happy with your stories

5585392 wait.. so do you like this story? I'm confused:derpyderp2:

5585771 Yes I love this story, AND I NEED YOU TO FINISH IT

I mean if you don't mind:yay:

5585781 will do my best! :rainbowdetermined2: stay tuned for updates!

5585797 Oh I will

This story is a Godsend (well to me it is)

It's just like Poker Night!

This gonna be heartwarming, isn't it?
:pinkiesad2: My tear ducts are ready.

Aria the Woobie. :fluttershysad:

Poor Aria, she needs a hug!

Dang now I feel sad for Aria

This is beautiful. I feel so sorry for Aria.

Alright, I like this so far. I'm interrested to see where this goes.

Underway, shift colors.

Damn it, Aria. You're supposed to be the tough one, the brawler of the group. You're not supposed to make my chest hurt.

*punches chest* Stop it! Stop hurting! :raritycry:

I totally didn't cry. i did.

Poor Aria! :fluttercry: That must be devastating!

Nice, I love this

Indirect ki-- Aria shook

I'm an idiot. :facehoof: When I saw this, I thought "indirect kick." :rainbowhuh:

5604990 hey, it could be that you know? :derpyderp2: or maybe anything else :rainbowlaugh:

Indirect kissing makes zero sense in a western-based story (the concept is uniquely Japanese; it exists in no other culture.). It's out of place, I think, and detracts from an otherwise good story. If you're setting the ship to sail, there are better ways.

5605985 hmm...never really thought of it that way. But I see what you mean! Thanks for the feedback! (Will try to improve!:twilightsheepish:)

don't stop I want to what happens next pls

This was a really good story. A shame it stops here since it's set up is actually quite well done. I enjoyed each of the characters the club was introduced to and though it didn't delve into it too much I also enjoyed how each member interacted and played off of one another. Oh and the whole "indirect kiss" thing was very sweet, I like how that character believes in that. Its a small thing, but really helps build her personality. I'll be keeping an eye on this story. But even if you never decide to continue it, for how much I was able to read. It was a fun time regardless.

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