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When Rainbow Dash complains about being bored in the library, after finding out that Twilight doesn't have the new Daring Do novel, an annoyed Twilight challenges the Pegasus to a game of chess in hopes that it cures her boredom. Suffice to say it not only cures her boredom, but it also makes her laugh. A lot.


Editors: DemonBrightSpirit, Twidashforever, and The Wandering Bard

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 26 )

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I should remember this for future works. I'll go in and clean up the repetition.

And thanks, I'm glad you're liking it.

Cheers,

L

Gotta love a good chess story. Lets see whether or not Rainbow is bluffing.

:rainbowhuh: wut's in the letter?

:twilightblush: Nothing for you.

:rainbowkiss: Wut's in it?

:twilightsmile: Nothing.

:rainbowdetermined2: I gots ta know Twilight!

:twilightblush: I told Spike to go easy on Rarity :rainbowlaugh:

:raritystarry: What? :moustache: cool. . .

Lol This almost reminds me of my story... Mainly because Twilight and Rainbow play chess in it, but that's not the point. Keep up the good work.

More please!:twilightsmile:

I can easily think what's going on in Twilight's mind.

:twilightoops: Why is Rainbow staring at me?:twilightblush: I can barely write this letter. :twilightangry2: Concentrate, Twilight! Concentrate!

And Rainbow's too.

:rainbowhuh: What's in the letter? :rainbowderp: gotta ask her later.:rainbowdetermined2: I'll just go steal it from Princess Celestia then.:rainbowkiss: I just think it's about Flash.

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I'll have chapter two done ASAP. I'll aim for Friday if anything :twilightsmile: .

Glad you're liking it.

Cheers,

L

Grand master level in one or two online chess tourney's here, that is a terrible way to play and she will get her ass handed to her long term unless she can find a way to take out all of Twi's developed pieces. Which won't happen. A plus of that sort of style being blended into a slightly more sensible play is that she won't get caught out on any bluffs... If she notices them...


https://xkcd.com/1112/

I wonder when the next chapter'll be....

6647794 Poor Dash.... she can't even have the satisfaction of beating Rainbow.

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Do you mean Twilight?

I always lose to Spike...
XD

“Oh, nothing…just that I always lose to Spike.”

Just like how I always lose to my friends who are also less intelligent than me. I feel like chess was made so that smart people can't win at all.

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That's how I feel too, bud. That's why I wrote this story.

L

6656868 Are you serious? That's a pretty great reason.

Great story!:pinkiehappy:

“Like ponyfeathers! That’s not a rule.”

Why would RD question that? She performed the same move a few lines up.

“Knight to E5,” Twilight said.

This is the best move in the history of chess ;)

Why's Twilight just taking it lying down? Rainbow cheated!

But the way, it looks like you've mixed up "former" and "latter". "Latter" refers to the second of two things previously mentioned.

Those things aside, this was a nice little story.

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