Cadence is left with a life altering decision that will not only affect her, but other members of the Sparkle family, and the Equestrian Empire.
Left with a difficult yet almost impossible decision, she prevails and makes a choice. How will it fare against her and others around her?
Birthday present for ChappedPenguinLips
Editors:
Mocha Star
NorrisThePony
P-Jay
ROBCakeran53
Thank you guys for helping me out in such a short time window! I appreciate it!
Sad. Very sad. The Alicorn curse.
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It is a curse, indeed.
Thanks for reading.
Don't forget to add the Cadance tag. I'd add Shining too; his presence is heavy here, even though he features only indirectly.
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What the...How'd did I forget that?
Wow.
Thanks.
7606029 so is there going to be another chapter or chapters added to the story? And if so is it going to end up as a Twidence story or......?
Well. You good sir/madam, have my attention!
I hate you for doing this to me.
> smashes upvote button over and over
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Oh, lookie, it's Cloud Hop!
Thanks dude!
good story but make me wonder what will happen next
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I have the last few chapters planned out.
There's definitely more to come!
I really love the way you have Cadance portrayed here. I can almost feel her pain, her denial, and it's heartbreaking.
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It was difficult for me to get into her head so profoundly. Surprised you picked that up.
This may only be the first chapter, but I can tell this is going to be really good.
Once more, speechless.
I might redact my promise to read more of your works; I can't get this fucked up every night...
wow just wow exultant story.
the curs of the Alicorn.
I would normally never do this but this story goes so good and complements the story I will post.
the pain of eternity
At least they have FlurryHeart......
Very well done.
I am afraid this isn't a story, I don't know the setting from the get go, no visual clues, but reading through I found it perfect for an audio reading.
This has the material to maximize a youtuber like Scribbler messability. I know that isn't a word, but neither is nervacited so cut me some slack. What I mean is that it carries the potential for an audio performer to mess around, add sound effects to create the mood this piece is going for.
That is why I say it is not a story, but part of one. That other part comes with the added sense of hearing
Where did you get the cover art?