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Thebravenorse


In the end, I hope you had the time of your life.

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In this story, which takes place in an alternate universe, you will come to know why Spike and Luna were not present at the last Gala. This is a short story of Love between two unlikely, but so likely souls. Of two outcasts finding a norm in each other. And learning why the Gala, with all its hype, might just be overrated. At least for Spike and Luna it is.

*The only difference in this universe is that Spike didn't go to the Gala.*

And a huge thank you to my editor: FieldOfMemories

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 13 )

HUZZA!

Lance blazer:moustache:

My two favorite characters well done, in my secret favorite ship, also well done!!!

It could have taken a little longer, but have to appreciate it for what it is, really.

NVC

A very cute story with the added bonus of featuring my favorite couples. Although as a small bit of advice from an avid reader, not a writer, the story seems a little rushed. The time between Spike worrying over his crush about Rarity, and then him going for Luna should've been a bit slower. Really let the characters get a feel for each other and allow them to interact a bit more realistically and freely. So this might have been better as a two part-er but that is just my opinion. Anyways fun story and I hope you follow this up someday. :pinkiehappy:

Was a little too fast but I enjoyed it nontheless. Also why did Pinkie Pie tell a Pinkie Secret? Like... she must have gotten carried away?

Oh my glob, I really like this FanFic so much now. :pinkiehappy:
So much DAWWWWW :twilightsheepish:

I don't like SpiLuna that much but...
HUZZAH!!

“Young Spike, have you forgotten who I am? The night is my domain.”

Like Batman and Judge Dredd, Luna is amazing.

The night is my domain.”

Or, to put it another way...
She is Batmare! :trollestia::facehoof:

everybody is going on about how good this story is, and they're right ! they also missed these. the last one is to good to not have that little extra dig.
Spike hoped off her back and ran inside [ hopped]
Spike and Luna retreated to the baloney for some fresh air [ beef or pork ? sorry [ balcony ]

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Aw...now I have a sad for not being the one to catch those...:rainbowlaugh: Not really though. It just proves how good the story is that I didn't catch those.

I totally love SpikexLuna.
Loved the reference to how they both sat together during the wedding in Slice Of Life.
And loved the Nightmare Moon bit too.

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