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This story includes a pairing that i have never seen done, and am surprised not to find anything one so read and enjoy. Set with an older Spike x Photo Finish

Photo Finish comes to Ponyville for the first annual Flowers and Friendship Carnival set up by Princess Twilight to find true beauty but is put off by a hard rain. Twilight letting her stay inside of the castle along with others awaiting the festival, but in her pursuit of beauty she meets someone broken by past events and sees the chance to make more beauty.

P.S. This is not a one shot.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 47 )

PF looks like she wants to get Spiked.

I like it.
"Insert Thor related meme here"

Spike's still carrying luggage? Wait, how big is he now?
Honestly though, interesting concept, but I'm just a little fearful it'll be too quick. The lack of commas led me to believe you may have rushed this, which is bad. Quality over quantity and all that.

6155226 Does everyone enjoy breaking mugs that much?

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I think its more breaking in general.
(Weird an image of a general snapping suddenly came to mind):pinkiecrazy:

Oh God, it's finally come. This is the only Spike shipping I could never write, simply because I despise Photo Finnish, but I'm glad someone made it happen.

Good work, mate.

Good. Just two things: 1.Details (like Spike's height and size. From what I can figure, Spike, had a growth spurt) , and 2.Slow down! That's all.
Good luck! Will be watching.:moustache:

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Don't worry it is all apart of the plan, well I am going to go back and edit more details in, as well as the comma situation, but the story pacing is like that for a reason.

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Thank you, this coming from one of my favorite fanfiction writers is actually an honor.

A nice little chapter I suppose. It answers a few details that were missing in the first chapter.
I'm gonna have to agree with Spike on that little comment. He's endured far worse abuse and not really been all that bothered.

That answer those questions. Good job!:twilightsmile:
Please continue.:moustache:

:moustache: Roseluck?

:twilightoops: no luck Roseluck?

:raritystarry: Did Spike get all the mares?

:moustache: yeah I sorta did. . . .

Okay, SPike doesn't seem like the type to leave somepony with foal, and I doubt Roseluck just up and said "You know what would make this easier? If I was on my own".

So now, say it with me, "What the buck?"

6218322 Can do, Sarge. "What the buck?"

Just to be clear, Spike isn't the one who said that last sentence, right?

6218385 "WHAT THE BUCK?"

6218513 ... Wot?

Not the interbreeding thing, but why would Spike leave a girl carrying his child? He doesn't seem like the kind who'd do that.

He tapped his ex?!?

hmmmm good cahpter but kinda short and get it spike

So many missing quotation marks... Other than that though, this has been a pleasant read. A little fast with the pacing and, this is just my opinion, a bit much on the inner monolog but overall good.

Huh, why didn't this show up in my updates.

Oh well, a rational reason was given for her, and they still seem to be on talking terms at least. Life gets in the way of all of them it seems.

I think that was quite funny. Spike's good at cheering ponies up.

The funny of this is the under the covers flashing.

If only there was a sex scene......

Felt a bit rushed, but still cute.

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That's why I took the sex tag off, I couldn't bring myself to do it

6295425 Unless there's a one-shot about Spike and Photo Finish having their bed fun.

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Believe me I thought about it, maybe in my next story

Don't you know anything about privacy, Twilight?

That's brave, doing that in front of a crowd.

Celestia must be snapping her cameras at this.

I have a feeling that this

"Oh hush Mr. if you pull my pail my diary appears out my flames."

Should be

"Oh hush, Mr. if you pull my tail my diary appears out of my flames."

Or something along those lines..:twilightblush:

Did you get that off me? I'll be really surprised if you didn't.

Momlestia is on the move!

They might as well let all that 'excess energy' out before she heads out to Fashion Week.

Spike could've just jump in the shower with Photo.

Where did Discord come from?

I'm surprised Twilight couldn't soundproof the room.

So that's the story of how they met? It was a fun ride honestly.
I still wanna know what happened to Roseluck though. Spike still has a stepson out there. How did the two of them deal with that, along with his kids now?

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Yea, I believe a lot of people will wonder that, it will mostly be explained in the sequel, most likely.

6514648 Ohhhh, sequel! Yay.

Ooookkkaay... I don't really know where this is gonna go. Guess I better stick around to find out.

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In all honesty Chissys story was gonna be the only one, I already have the first 2 chapters on a usb. I started watching the show from the beginning and saw the episode with Photot Finish and imagination took over and I put Chrysalis part on hold for this story.

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