Set 3 years and a month after Spike and Photo Finish wedding, the changeling are back, though they come in peace. Spike was there just to document what was happening, The Princesses didn't trust the media with the truth, he didn't want to end up engaged to Chrysalis because of it. Can Spike make any of this work? What about Photo Finish how does she feel about this? What about Roseluck or both of his children or his friends for that matter? What is Chrysalis thinking she is going to gain with any of this, and what is she really after?
Chapters (10)
Well, that was... inpulsive. It seems like everyone is already making decisions without taking so much as a minute to think over other options or if they really need to be made now.
Well, if Spike would do that so easily, I can believe that Photo would react that well to it.
With anyone other than spike and photo finish this wouldn't work when it comes to the reactions. But since it is, I can see them having such a laid back attitude towards this situation.
Photo's taking this really well.
Wait til Chrysalis see 'double dragons'
So, does Photo not really feel threatened by Chrysalis? At all? Regardless of her position, talking to her like that must take guts.
In other words, Chrysalis want to feel some of Spike's funky flow.
my thoughts: if it's goin "M", might as well go all the way
Err, just to note, do you actually read over this out loud to yourself before you post it?
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Yes, 2 or 3 times, did I miss something?
6879794 No offense, but I'm surprised I have to answer that. I can see a mistake almost every paragraph.
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Mainly because I seriously need a beta reader
What happened there I wonder...
Let's find out how they are in handcuffs
So much for a secret place.
Everyone has pent-up urges to be release.
Why the sudden shift into first person?
When can has next chapter
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Im getting back in it so maybe next few days
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So… you are getting back to it.
Then what does the big CANCELLED indication slapped on there indicate
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For now im finishing Somethin Aint Right but i may come back to this story. That being said im writing like 3 stories at once so ill come back to this story once those are in a more comfortable place or completed.
Update pls