Two humans, one hot-headed and brash, the other cold and calculating, have been warped to Equestria thanks to a blunder by Twilight Sparkle. This is the story of how these two newcomers interact with the lives of the Mane Six, and how they adapt to the new world they have been presented with.
How will they cope? How will the Mane Six cope with them?
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You know whats weird? Reminds me of these 2 kids that I know of in school.
Just Sayin.
Oh my...
Stay frosty!
~Hazard~
tracking, seems interesting enough
it's playing out very well so far, so i'm gonna go ahead and track this story.
Work on your spacing. Every time there is a new speaker start a new paragraph. Tracking.
Seems rather nice, but you should start a new paragraph whenever a different character speaks.
I love Christian. He somewhat reminds me of myself.
Sounds interesting, although the "Human teleported to Equestria" idea could be called "Generic" nowadays.
Y'know, Chris, you seemed like a nice guy, someone that I would cheer for! Your smugness, charm... But then you said Pepsi was better than Coke.
So, consequently, I'll be cheering on for Geo.
"Captain! Epic fic off the starboard bow"
"MEN! Ready the cannons! Aim! TRACK!"
BOOM!!!
"Bulls-eye, Captain!"
"And now, maites, we wait "
Seems like it could be a fun ride, tracked
394767
Dr. Pepper.
that is all
395194
no u
Interesting. Both humans seem likeable, but considering their viewpoints, Geo will probably react better towards them than Christian, though I agree that pepsi is superior to coke, unless we're counting vanilla coke.
Surprising Twilight didn't ask for Rarity's help in the first place considering she's the expert on gem hunting, but with her personality... yeah, she wouldn't think of that. Curious if Lyra's gonna make a passing appearance.
Only problem is that we have no idea what the humans look like save their physical mass. Tracked.
Pretty cool. I'm tracking
393563
Intriguing...do you go to school in Melbourne, Australia? Because then you may have actually met us.
395954:.....Oh......Shit.
395334
It seems you know the plot already...your name is also Shadow Scryer...funny, that.
I might have someone comment on Lyra.
Don't worry, physical appearances in the next chapter.
395964
I'll take that as a no.
395980: Yeah mo. Dammit, it would have been cool if we went to the the school.
394553
Thanks for the tip! I'll work on that.
394767
I actually like both, but as for the soft-drink superiority argument, I wanted something to show their constant petty arguments. Besides, cheer for either. You may change your mind later, you may not.
395987
Yeah, a fellow brony or pegasister would have been nice to speak to.
Oh well.
396024: I know......
396014
I will not cheer for some... Pepsi-lover!
I kid, I kid.
...Maybe.
Seems interesting enough, the dynamic between the characters (Christian and Geo, that is) is really well done. Tracking!
396051
I was going for a whole 'opposites attract' kind of friendship. No romance.
Thanks for tracking.
TRACKINGS. TRACKINGS EVERYWHERE.
396076
I wasn't getting at romance at all. Heh!
But yeah, the opposites attract thing makes for very fun conversations!
396030
Ow! Right in the feelings!
I like this story. Well so far, but I have no doubt that it will stay good.
Geo and Christian are pretty well done too. And for some reason I am strangely reminded of myself when I read about Christian, (Good at games, Prefers Pepsi over coke, cold and calculating, etc) but I'm probably getting ahead of myself. Anyway, good start, hope it keeps it.
Keep writing!
396839
Heh, your wish has been granted.
Y U stop here?
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397710
I'm not sure I understand the question. Do you mean: "Why did I stop updating?" or "Why did I stop at this point in the story?"
If it is actually a different question entirely, then please restate it.
397723 It was meant as a joke....
397729
Oops.
Damn I feel sorry for them, that is probably the worst "first contact" scenario I have ever read... And I love it, keep up the good work!
)
(I also can't wait for Christian's revenge, heh heh heh
This is quite simply put...hilarious! Keep it up!
Stay frosty!
~Hazard~
397851 I have to agree, I think this takes the cake for the worst non-lethal first contact i've ever seen.
You fail to disappoint, keep up the great work!
P. S. Christian is best human!
398596
I am, aren't I?
397961
Now when you say worst...do you mean 'bad for them' worst or 'this plot is terrible' worst? I hope the former is true.
Ha! This was excellent. What a terrible first impression (and I mean that in the best of ways!).
Very well done chapter. As many have said that is the best worst first encounter ever. Good job
398811 I mean it as the "good job convincing the peace-loving ponies you eat them" worst.
I sense BitchLestia, Twibitch, Raricunt , Spiketard, Rainbowtard, Applef**k will make an appearance ! God damn it , Chris dont give in, never apologize , its their fault, but stay smart and wait for the perfect moment. You have been assaulted, and captured against your own will, better do something about it !
Its gonna be TO THE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!! WITH THEM
I am enjoying this also, why did they not simply explain they didn't know fluttershy was sentient?
I hate how in pretty much every HiE story with this kind of first contact, it's always the humans who are righteously fucked over and get captured.
I LOVE THIS!
*slowly dying in my own drool* MUST HAVE MORE!