A short family/friendship story that takes place some time after the Royal Wedding. Was inspired by a picture by Doggie999 on Deviant Art.
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RhulainSabermane
I love to write as a hobby and I'm a student of Marine sciences. I won't upload and load stories as quick as other may like as real life calls, but I love writing.
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"A Brother's Love for his Sister..."
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This was enjoyable. being the oldest out of 4 siblings I understand how little quirks are for your younger sibling.
Being the youngest of three.... Fuck it
well that was weird as hell.
Liked it
but quirk or not, it is kind of perverted (even if it is not intensional)
I don't know if I want to read this. I'm very anti-incest (does that make me prejudiced?), so...probably not.
It's not incest, I just based the behavior from some anime shows. I've always found those funny.
609697Now that I think about it, this does remind me of peoples behavior in anime. For that, you win.
This deserves a moustache
What a nice relationships..
I like...
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Shining Armor, wtf are you doing???
Ok, this might sound rude so please don't take this the wrong way. I don't like the way you ended it, the rest of it was really nice but the last bit there just seemed......odd. I don't know why but it just rubbed me the wrong way a little.
All that being said I really like the whole idea of it and overall you did a fine job of it. I was wondering if you would mind if I took the basis of the story and gave it my own spin to it. I would understand if you said no, and that you would want credit if you said yes instead.
Either way, this was adorable and fun.
I thought this story was pleasant. I wouldn't call it cute, funny or even great. It was pleasant. It was something nice to read that filled up my time, but nothing more. This story needed more. By that I mean it was too simple. It didn't have enough to be funny and it wasn't sweet enough to be called cute. I agree with 2487794 because the ending was bad. I think that you should've stopped at that last 'Click.' It would have been a funny way to end it. It would make you think "Oh, Shining Armor. You'll never learn!" This really isn't a great piece. I can't say that I like it.