Discord and Chrysalis join forces to take over Equestria, but a failed attemp turns everypony into a human, and now both villains are dead set on attaining their goal. With the help from Princess Luna and a mysterious book, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy must fight back this villainous team and stop their plan to destroy the world's balance as the new protectors of Equestria, the Power Rangers: Guardians of Harmony!
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First story ever that I wrote. Advises are welcome
Chapters (4)
Changes made to improve the story:
-New cover art: the Rangers Emblem, done by myself (Warning: crappy artwork is crappy) EDIT: Better, Power Ranger-Title like cover (still crappy
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-All accents have been removed.
-Several pieces of dialogue were fixed to better identify which character is talking.
-Now all the 'mental dialogue' is marked with << >> and is in Italics.
-Several changes were made to some of the passive powers of the mane 6. Pinkie's was renamed, Fluttershy's was sligthly modified and Twilight's was completely changed.
-The conversation between AJ and Luna has been changed to better reflect future events.
-The description of the Chaos-lings was slightly modified to better reflect their nature.
-The original forms of the elements have been added to the Rangers' uniform.
Wow you've updated I thought u gave up
I wished you told us that first 3 were slightly the same and skip to chapter 4
Now for the plot
Throughout the entire chapter I notice lots of errors in grammar, conceder geting a proof reader, other thAn that it was excellent
When luna was speaking It felt like she was zordon or princess shayla basically it felt like a real epasode of pr
One final note [quote/The flying object corrected its course and flew directly to its owner, the Harmony Yellow Ranger/quote]
Should be like this :"yellow harmony ranger" it sounds more better
i think u should also thing of improving ur wording in this story as it makes following along very difficult. the only logical explanation is that English is not ur first language, and if this is the case then u can be forgiven, but if u r fluent in English then this writing was simply sloppy...
So, the Espers from Final Fantasy are the Zords. I wonder if we'll get to see more of them. Like, I don't know, Bahamut?
And Twilight just realized that she was worried about nothing with visiting her parents! Hopefully, this will help her with her OCD and allow her to start healing from the damage that was caused by Celestia's death.
3146202 You're...not exactly in a position to be harping about grammar to the author, since your comment not only has even worse grammar, but your spelling is pretty dismal as well.
3149999 i dont remember saying anything about grammar in my comment, i actually think the authors grammar is spot on, its their wording and how they present the sentences. it simply seems clumsy and makes for a difficult read. i am also well aware of my bad spelling, and i tend to use texttalk in comments as it saves time
AWESOME!!
That was really well done. A few spelling errors and some missing words here and there but besides that good job on making this chapter.
Great job mixing in Mighty Morphin, and Mysticforce. I enjoyed that bit when they went to the health drink bar and met "Health Mix". He reminded me of the guy that worked in the youth center in "M.M".
Question? Did you get the whole weapons swap idea from "Kaizoku Sentai, Gokaigers"? If so nice job. I thought that it was interesting that the weapons could change form when being held by a different ranger.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
I almost have to wonder what was going through Pinkie's mind as they were in their civilian forms and surrounded by the changelings.
........Meh, probably something random or something.
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The first three chapters go through what is the first episode, and as such they have the same name: "Legacy of Power". I tried to get a proof-reader, twice, both of them had their hands full, though most grammar problems are fixed already.
I also fixed the mistake you pointed out, but next time try to be a little more politely
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. I tried getting a proof-reader to help me, but I didn't had luck.
Fui tan obvio? (spanish: was I that obvious?) Yeah, my wording could improve a lot
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? Twilight is not going nuts here! After learning of the vacation, she realized that she was fretting about the apology when her parents don't even know about what is happening, thus, won't be a little be upset for her not visiting them after two weeks because they aren't in Ponyville.
LOLwut
That scene was played just for laughs and to emphatize how things are going for her right now. Though it was rather cruel from my part, I was thinking on cutting that scene altogether actually.
Also, I won't give any declarations on what may or may not be included in future chapters. But keep guessing, it's fun
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For a reply on general writing observations, please read the replies above.
Healthy Mix is supposed to resemble Jack LaLaine, but yes he is the "Ernie" of this series, but don't expect to see many other OCs. As for your question about the weapons: I did
You don't wanna knowAre you crazy?! It would be safer to swim on a piranha tank inside an active volcano than to wonder what's in Pinkie's mind!3152207 Oops. I really guess I should have been more careful about the way I read the ending.
As for that scene, if it helps her spirit heal, by all means you should keep it in there. Just get someone to help you edit it so it's clear about that part.
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Ah ok, Sorry if I didn't leave a proper comment on your story.
I also looked up the guy you were referring to, I got the wrong person still great job on the character.
I was just glad to see that you were able to continue your story, also it was a blast to read it and worth the wait.
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You offered a little more than just pointing out that there are spelling errors, and that's a comment in my book, so no need for apologies
This is not a bad story. Sad that Celestia is gone but can't wait to read more! I read the whole thing before posting.
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(even Rainbow here is impressed XD)
Damm-that was fast
Glad you liked it. I wish I could get around to write the next episode soon.
3996659 I'm a fast reader sometimes. I'm sure you got the next chapter plan but you may have trouble getting it done, right?
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Pretty much, yeah
Cool story so far, bro!
3997017 Is the next chapter coming out soon? I been months since my last post.
I really like this story is there going
is there going to be another chapter coming out 
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There is another chapter coming up, but it's been a slow process and I've been finding dificulties while polishing the plot, not to mention that it seems I lost another proofreader. I'll keep people posted when a change occurs though, so don't despair.
HSXI- May the Power protect you.
4537642 okay thank you for letting me know
Dang it, I keep looking every where for a Power Rangers/MLP crossover (In which the ponies AREN'T the rangers.) Oh well, since I can't find any at all and all I see is Pony Ranger crossovers, guess this'll hold me off.
This story has not had a comment posted on it in over thirty weeks.
THIS HATH BEEN CORRECTED!!!!!!
Besides the one that was deletedAll sillyness aside, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter coming out.
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Thirty years? Look, last chapter/episode was posted on 2013. We're now in 2015
2015 - 2013 = 2 (two).
Also, the previous comment was just a poor idiot that can't take constructive criticism.
About the next chapter. Please check This Forum Thread and This Blog Post for information about the story's progress.
5961727 I said weeks mate. I would double check my post.
I had already read the blog post but the fourm thread was new.
Sigh I really want to help, I really do, but every time I take up an editing position I end up editing half a chapter then completely forgetting about it, but that also might be my method of completely re-writing the chapter.
I could try a different method and try to help, if you'd be willing.
I think that, As a power rangers fan myself, you have done me right.